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篇一:初中英语写作范文(说明文)

节 人物介绍

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My Best Friend

My best friend is Li Hua. He is 13 years old and he is a student of Guangming middle school. He is very tall and strong. He works hard at school and would like to help others. When I came to this school in the beginning, I was bad at math and English. I failed in a test and was worried about my study. At this time, Li Hua gave me a hand and helped to improve my math and English. Thanks to his help, my math and English improved a lot and I got good results in the following exams. Gradually we became very good friends. In my opinion, Li Hua is not only an excellent student but also a helpful and kind person. Everyone would like to be his friend.

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A

Mrs Brown

Mrs Brown is an excellent teacher. She is a good-looking woman, with gentle manners and a kind smile. Mrs Brown likes her work very much. She works hard and tries her best to make every class perfect. Listening to her talk is an artistic

treat indeed. She treats her students as her own children, not only strictly but also kindly. She always shows deep concern for them and makes great efforts to train them into persons of ability. All the students respect her very much.

B

Charlie Chaplin

Charlie Chaplin was born in 1889 in London. He came from a family of artists. His mother was an actress and his father was an actor. He started dancing and singing for money in 1894. In 1904, he went to America and he became a film director in 1914. He made many funny films from 1914 to 1966. He died in 1977. Many people were very sad at the news. People all over the world will remember him forever.

C

My Pen Pal-Tom

Tom Brown, my pen pal, is an American boy. He is 17 years old. He lives at 69 Park Road, New York with his parents. Tom is a student of No.4 High School. On weekdays, he studies very hard. Art, music and computer are his favorite subjects. In his spare time, he likes doing sports. He usually goes walking or swimming on weekends. He also likes traveling. He goes to many countries during the summer holiday every year.

第2节地点介绍

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Dear Anna,

Thanks for your letter. Now I'll tell you something about our school and our school life. Our school is very big. There are over 2 500 students and about 200 teachers. There are many high buildings in it. In the schoolyard, you can see many green trees and beautiful flowers. In our school, there are many clubs. Every afternoon, we can take part in all kinds of activities, such as basketball, table tennis, and painting. We can read newspapers and books in the school library. And we can also go online in the school computer labs. I've been in the school for more than two years. I do well in all the subjects. And I get on well with my classmates.

I often help them, too.

Yours,

Li Hong

牛刀小试

A

My New Neighborhood

I live in a new neighborhood now. My family moved here last year. From then on more and more people became our neighbors. A big supermarket and more than twenty different shops have been setup since last year. An underground nearby is under construction. It seems that our life gets more and more convenient. It is said that many tall buildings nearby will be put up. It is reported that a new park in the north of our neighborhood will be built soon. What a green and nice neighborhood it will be!

B

A new teaching building has been set up in our school. It is in the north of the school. It has six floors. On the first floor, there are three science labs. We can do all kinds of experiments here. We often have English classes in the sound labs on the second floor. On the fifth floor there is a big reading room and three computer rooms. We can learn to operate computers every day. The reading room opens from Monday to Friday. By the way, behind the building there is a botanical garden.

C

Australia lies on the west of the Pacific Ocean. It covers an area of 7.6 million square kilometers. It has a population of over10 million. Most of them live in the east of the country by the sea. Canberra, the capital of Australia, is a beautiful city. Sydney is one of the biggest cities in Australia. It has many places of interest. The Sydney Opera House is famous all over the world.

第3节 事物介绍

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I have a bike. I ride it to school every day. The bike came to me two years ago as a birthday present from my mom. It cost my mom about 580 yuan. It was a big sum of money for her at that time. I know it showed the great love of my mom for me. The bike was made in Shanghai and it is about 100 cm high and its color is blue, my favourite. It plays an important part in my school life. And I hope someday in the future, I'll have a car to drive. A car is much faster and more convenient than a bike especially when it rains or snows. I'll drive my mom anywhere she wants.

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A

Chinese Food

China is very famous for its food all over the world. There are Cantonese cuisine, Sichuan cuisine, Shanghai cuisine and so on. Cantonese cuisine is a bit light, Sichuan cuisine is very hot and Shanghai cuisine is rather oily. In the north of China, people eat a lot of noodles and dumplings. In the south of China, people eat a lot of

rice and seafood.(转自:wWw.DXf5.Com 东星 资源网:初中说明文作文) Chinese food is good in color and taste. So I like it very much.

B

Polo Cars

The Polo car is designed only for Chinese families. The car is in a popular and fashionable style with

four seats, and it can travel on all kinds of roads and under any weather conditions. In addition, the proper size of the car makes it easy to drive. Usually, its highest speed is 180 kilometers per hour. Anyone who owns

Polo will enjoy it very much. The price-RMB 130 000, is lower than that of the same kind both at home and abroad. It is certainly a wise choice to buy a Polo car.

C

The Eiffel Tower

Do you know the Eiffel Tower? It's the symbol of Paris. Nobody will miss the chance to visit it when he or she arrives in Paris. It's 320 meters in height. It is made of iron and it is about 7 000 tons in weight. There're 1 711 steps to the top. It took 250 workers 2 years to build it. It was finished in 1889.It's one of the most famous buildings in the world.

第4节 事理说明

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Lifelong Learning

When you finish high school or university, is learning done?The answer is “No”. In many countries, people continue learning all their lives. Why is lifelong learning important?You go to school and learn. You study. You take tests. But learning doesn't only happen in school. And learning doesn't stop when you finish high school or

university. You are learning all the time. For example, learning can happen when you go to a museum. It can also happen when you read a book. You learn when you play

sports or when you take a trip. Learning is life! We never stop learning. Every day, you can improve yourself by learning something new.

牛刀小试

A

The Robots

With the development of science and technology, many families may have robots in a few years. Robots can help people with housework and do the most unpleasant jobs.

A robot can talk with old people so that they don't feel lonely any more. It can also babysit kids and tell them funny stories to make them happy. It can do all kinds of chores, such as doing the laundry, making meals and so on. With the robots' help,

people can live a happier life.

B

Walking - a Wonderful Exercise

Walking is a healthy form of exercise. It can be done quite easily. Whether you are young or old, you can go out for a walk. To walk very often is good for our health, especially for those fat people. As everyone knows, it can help them lose weight. Besides these, taking a walk every day is also good for our heart. If you try to walk as often as possible, you'll have a healthier heart. In a word, walking is really a wonderful exercise.

C

Some students often stay up late to improve their grades. A few students stay up late because of the pressure of exams. Some of them sleep for only three or four hours every night. The next day, they often feel sleepy in class. Some even sleep. As a result, they couldn't catch what the teachers say. Not having studied their lessons well, they find it difficult to make good performance in the exams. So, it is not worthwhile to stay up late if you want to study well.

第5节 方式方法介绍

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How to Protect Our Eyes

Eye is the window of our mind. We use our eyes to see everything around us. Without eyes, nothing is left beside you but darkness. How to protect our eyes? It's not right to keep your eyes working for a long time. You'd better not read in a strong or poor light. Don't read in bed or on a moving bus. Remember to keep your books away from your eyes for about a foot and do eye exercises every day. What's more, a balanced diet is necessary. Follow my advice and form a good habit. It's time to say goodbye to thick glasses.

牛刀小试

A

How to Make Tomato Juice

Tomato juice is a kind of healthy drink. It tastes good and is simply made. To make it, follow this easy process: First, try to make sure that the tomatoes are clean. Next, put them in hot water for a few minutes to loosen the skin.Then, cut them into small pieces and press the juice from them. Finally, mix the juice with a little sugar. Soon you can drink a glass of nice tomato juice.

B

How to Learn English Well

Is English important? How to improve English? Firstly, we should be brave enough to talk with others in English. By doing this, we can improve our speaking and listening skills. Secondly, we should try to listen to all kinds of English programs as much as possible. In this way, we can gradually improve our pronunciation and listening. Thirdly, we should often read English books. Fourthly, we should often write. It is very important to avoid writing in Chinese way and using the Chinese grammar. As long as you listen, speak, read and write more, you are sure to learn English well!

C

How to Be a Good Student?

How to be a good student? I think a good student should have the following qualities:First, a good student should have good behavior. A person with fine qualities will set himself an excellent example of good manners for people around him. People like to make friends with him/her because he/she is friendly. It's more important than knowledge. Second, a good student should study hard and use the knowledge to solve problems. The knowledge he/she uses will benefit his life. Third, a good student should be in good health. If he isn't healthy, he can do nothing. So it is very important. In short, whoever has these qualities will be a good student.

篇二:初中说明文写作指导心得体会

初中说明文写作指导心得体会

作者:刘浩国

来源:《新课程学习·中》2013年第07期

摘 要:随着社会的进步与发展,说明文的运用范围越来越宽广,初中语文说明文写作教育是提高学生说明文写作能力的黄金时期,且有助于学生在考试写作中取得良好成绩。关键词:基本点;事物特征;写作能力

说明文是说明所述之事或物的特征,阐明一定道理,给人以了解与认识的写作文体。且说明文所说明的事物性能、形态、演化及道理和人们的生活、学习、文化、科学等都有着密切的联系。初中阶段说明文写作教学是培养学生记叙基础和写作的新阶段,是绝对不可以忽视的。下面就让我来谈一谈这些年我对初中说明文写作指导的心得体会。

一、立足基本点

初中说明文写作一定要具备客观性和科学性两大特点,这是说明写作的基础和根本,也是较难把握的重点。在教学过程中可以用分解法来抓住这两个重点。第一,说明文体要强调科学性,要求说明条理清晰,重视写清楚事物外部和内部的结构特征,且不能局限于平实解说。比如:课文《中国石拱桥》就生动形象地讲述了建筑的结构、特征,最初可以将这种说明文作为对学生写作的要求,培养学生写作兴趣。第二,说明文写作题材要和人们熟知的事物相关,此外也可找一些课外题材的范文给学生学习。

二、突破认识

为了能让学生写出好的说明文,学生一定要对所说明事物有一个完整的了解和认识。为了做到这一点,学生必须要认真、深入地观察事物特征。为了改变学生观察事物的随意性,教师应进行有针对性的指导,可以先列出一些提纲,让学生带着所要解决的问题慢慢仔细地观察,并做相应的记录。教师带领学生观察的时候要指导学生分清主次,把握整体和局部的区别。

三、借助仿写桥

初中生在掌握了事物一定的知识后,可能还会遇到行文的困难。为了训练学生语言运用、段落安排的能力。可以适当地运用仿写的教学办法。模仿是创新的桥梁,是说明文写作的捷径。但实际运用中,要根据学生的实际来确定模仿点,不可完全照抄。初中教材中的仿点非常丰富,可以根据学生实际水平,循序渐进地进行模仿,让学生在模仿中体会说明文写作的重点和语句,提高他们的写作水平。

总之,初中说明文写作应把握立足基本点和突破认识两个要点,再采用仿写桥的办法来训练说明文写作能力,这样就可以让学生的说明文水平得到一个较高的发展。

篇三:初中说明文写作技巧指导

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一、说明文的类型:分事物说明文和事理说明文(从内容角度,根据说明的对象和目的)。

事物说明文一般标题就是说明的对象;

事理说明文找准开头结尾的总结句。

因为说明对象是一篇文章所要介绍的事物或事理,一般是一个名词或名词短语,可以从两个方面入手:一看文题二看首尾段。事物说明文指出被说明事物即可。事理说明文指出说明内容,形成一个短语:介绍了??的??(对象加内容)。

二、说明文的语言:平实、生动说明文(语言表达角度)。

三、说明方法:一般回答三个字,要掌握几种常见的说明方法,会分析在文中的作用:

①.举例子:具体真切地说明了事物的××特点。

②.分类别:条理清楚地说明了事物的××特点。对事物的特征/事理分门别类加以说明,使说明更有条理性。使说明的内容眉目清楚,避免重复交叉的现象。

③.列数字:具体而准确地说明该事物的××特点。使说明更有说服力。

④.作比较:突出强调了被说明对象的××特点(地位、影响等)。

⑤.下定义:用简明科学的语言对说明的对象/科学事理加以揭示,从而更科学、更本质、更概括地揭示事物的特征/事理。

⑥.打比方:打比方就是修辞方法中的比喻。生动形象地说明该事物的××特点,增强了文章的趣味性。

⑦.画图表:使读者一目了然,非常直观形象地说明的事物的××特点。

⑧.作诠释:对事物的特征/事理加以具体的解释说明,使说明更通俗易懂。

下定义与作诠释的区别是:定义要求完整,而诠释并不要求完整,对事物的特征/事理加以具体的解释说明,使说明更通俗易懂。可以颠倒。

⑨.摹状貌:对事物的特征/事理加以形象化的描摹,使说明更具体生动形象。

⑩.引资料:能使说明的内容更具体、更充实。用引用的方法说明事物的特征,增强说服力,如引用古诗文、谚语、俗话。引用说明在文章开头,还起到引出说明对象的作用。

四、说明顺序:时间顺序(程序顺序)、空间顺序、逻辑顺序。在答题时可答得具体些。

如:空间顺序(从上到下,从里到外,总到分,外到内,前到后,左到右,整体到局部,都可反之等,常用方位词如介绍建筑物或实体)。

逻辑顺序(先结果后原因,层层递进,现象到本质,因到果,果到因,主到次,浅入深,个别到一般等,常用表因果、表事理顺序的词,如“因为、所以”“首先、其次”)。

时间顺序则是说明事物发展、演变,例如介绍工作程序的文章。

ü掌握答题格式:本文使用了的说明顺序对加以说明,使说明更有条理性,便于读者理解。(第一空应该填具体的说明顺序,第二空应该填写具体的事物名称或说明的事理。如果是事理性说明文,但又不能准确表述,可用“事理”、“科学事理”等模糊性的语言表述。)

五、说明对象:指文章说明的主要人或事物(一般不必答人或事物的特点)。

六、说明文的结构常见的形式有:“总——分”式(或由总到分,或由分到总,或总分总)、并列式、递进式等。分析文章结构,抓中心句及连接词,如“首先”“其次”“还”“也”

“此外”等词语

七、中心句:出现的位置开头或结尾,有时在句中。判断,多为概括性较强的句子。叙述句、描写句、阐释句、疑问句一般不宜作中心句。

其他文体文章也如此。

ü概括文段的中心句。

对策:(1)思考该段说明的内容,不仅要注意主要的,还要注意次要的。(2)紧扣表秩序的词语,如“首先”“其次”“还有”等词语,参照上下段落的中心句的句式进行概括。

八、初中说明文语言

类型1、加点字词有何作用?抓住说明文语文准确这一特点答题。

对策:答:准确/生动形象/地说明了事物“??”的特征/事理。

类型2、能否替换为另一个词语?并说明理由。

对策:答:(1)不可以。

(2)原词的意思或内容。

(3)所换词语的意思或内容。

(4)换了后意思有何改变,与不符合实际。

类型3、限制性词语能否删去?

对策:答:(1)表态(删还是不删)。

(2)定性。如:“比较”“几乎”“相当”等词表程度修辞;“大约”“可能”“左右”等表估计,“多”“有余”等表数量。

(3)若删去,原来什么样的意思就变成了什么样的意思了,不符合实际,太绝对了。

(4)xx词体现了语言的准确性、周密性、科学性。

类型4、从文章中找出一个能体现说明文语言“准确”特点的词句,并体会。

类型5:指代——“这些条件”、“这种现象”“同样道理”等在文中具体指代什么。

对策:一般指的就是代词前面的那句话,找最近的一句话。有时要注意可能不是整句话,而是其中的一部分。

9、常见考点:

1、对说明对象及说明特征理解。 2、对说明方法辨识与理解。 3、对说明顺序的分析与理解。 4、对文章段落结构特点的分析。 5、对文意、层意、段意的概括。 6、对关键词语、重点句子含义及其表达作用的评析。 7、对说明语言准确性的体会。

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