篇一：英语作文点评
I Have a Dream
信阳市第三职业高级中学三（3）班 孙鹏丽
Almost every student has a colorful dream , so do I .I want to be a wealth① women .
Perhaps you will be surprised at my dream . I want to explain something about it .
My hometown it so poor that many young people have to leave home to make a living in big cities , leaving their children alone at home . That is not good to them . For lack of their parents’ take care② , some of them become shy and awkward③,and some even become criminals .
Therefore , if I can become a successful woman , I will set up my own company and many factories in my hometown . Then our villagers can get a job and steady income. At that time , they can live a happy life with their families , and avoid leaving home and the divide④ from their children . If that’s the case , my hometown will become beautiful and prosperous .
As far as I’m concerned , only having a dream is not enough , in order to realize my dream , I will be sure to seize every minute to study hard to make a good base to enter the society , for my dream , for my hometown and for my motherland .
点评：
1﹑妙语锦囊: be surprised at ...对??感到意外； so...that...如此??以致?? ；make a living谟生；leave ...alone把某人独自留下；set up建立；live a happy life过幸福的生活；in order to...为了??；make a good base打好基础。
2、 亮点展示：文章的篇幅不长，却给人以跌宕起伏之感。这是因为小作者对文章的结构进行了精心的设计，并铺以关键性的过渡词。如：perhaps you...或许你会??；therefore因此；if that’s the case如果那样的话；as far as I’m concerned就我而言。
3、不足之处：①wealth是名词，应换成形容词wealthy。②take care是短语动词，应将take去掉，保留名词care。③此处应是误用：awkward是指“笨拙，不熟练”，作者想表达的应该是“害羞胆小”所以用cowardly。④divide作名词时，不是“分离”，而是“分水岭”的意思，故应换成separation。
4、总结：“文章情真”，小作者以细腻的笔调写出了自己对梦想的追求。对文章的结构，小作者也进行了精心的安排，给人以跌宕起伏之感。更为可贵的是：小作者能从身边所观察到的现象引出了“留守儿童”这一敏感话题，叫人深思。作为一篇课堂命题作文，小作者能在
指导教师：刘凤
篇二：英语作文电影《2012》观后感
Yuri
After finishing the movie 2012, a character left a deep impression on me. The character is Yuri, the Russian billionaire. Although he is not the leading role in the movie, the character is portrayed very real in my opinion. According to the dialogues in the movie, we can know a lot of him.
He was an excellent boxer in the past, so he has a strong body. He also works with a good brain, so he can own great wealth. Now we can say Yuri is a successful man in business.
When disaster comes, a man true self is showed out obviously. In the whole process of escape, he is always very resolute. After getting the message that the No.3 boat is without hope, he strikes managers down and leads all the people running to the No.4 boat. At that time, he shows his good judgment. So in terms of ability, Yuri is an excellent man.
Many people describe him with selfishness and greed. Maybe it’s true. But I think he isn’t without a single redeeming feature. On the air, he looks the picture with his wife and children, and he calls his valentine “girl friend”, never “lover”. Obviously he loves his wife and children deeply. For leaving his valentine behind, I consider there is no mistake because they have no love all along. As a father, he takes good care of his two sons; especially at last he
sacrifices himself for pushing his son to the boat. At least Yuri is a great father and good men loving his families deeply.
篇三：怦然心动英文影评(女主)
Flipped
<Flipped> is a American film which was directed by Rob Reiner ,one of the most famous director in the world .It is a love story about two lovely kids’ childhood and their school time .
Juli Baker is innocent,courageous,inflexible and endearing .In general ,our life is so boring and dull that we can’t enjoy our life very well .But Juli found geart ways to discover more pleasure in the nature .She enjoyed all of the smells from the nature world such as green plants, flowers, wind and etc . She thought those make our world so nice and beautiful .Beauty is found everywhere. Our eyes do not show a lack of sense of beauty, but a lack of observation.Everybody should love life and live with a hope-filledheart .