篇一：作文改错
Some are in favor of the ideas that English should be cancel.
English can let us to save so much of english.
The number of the students for the opinion are 60percent.
It is useful that study english well for us.
Some are for favor of the idea that you can reduce the burden on our learning.
There are 60% students agree, they thinks cancled english can decrease students burden and we can pay more attention in chinese that we don’t spent time on studying english.
篇二：作文改错
错文：A Visit to Beijing Zoo
Last Sunday morning, I and my friend go to visit the Beijing Zoo. We went by bike. It take us about half a hour to get there. When we get to there, it is already crowded with people. There was a lot of foreign visitors, too. It is said that the Beijing Zoo is largest in Asia and one of the largest in the world. There are hundred of different kinds of animals. It will take a whole day to see all the animals there. So we decided to saw some of the most interesting ones. We saw the elephants first and then the monkeys. Finally we go to see our favourite "friends"--the giant pandas. We were delighted to see them waving to us. We really have a wonderful time in the zoo.
正文： A Visit to Beijing Zoo
Last Sunday morning, my friend and I went to visit the Beijing Zoo. We went by bike. It took us about half an hour to get there. When we got there, it was already crowded with people. There were a lot of foreign visitors, too. It is said that the Beijing Zoo is the largest in Asia and one of the largest in the world. There are hundreds of different kinds of animals. It would take a whole day to see all the animals there. So we decided to see some of the most interesting ones. We saw the elephants first and then the monkeys. Finally we went to see our favourite "friends"--the giant pandas. We were delighted to see them waving to us. We really had a wonderful time in the zoo.
错文： National Day
National Day is coming soon, and I has a plan on that day. Firstly, I needs to complete all my homeworks
正文： National Day
National Day is coming soon, and I have a plan on that day. Firstly, I need to complete all my homeworks. After that, I am going to invite my friends to come to my house and play the games. Secondly, I am going to cook some delicious food for my family. Lastly, my family members are going to my cousin's birthday party. I think the National day will be a wonderful day!
错文：
My mother is tallest than my father.I'm heavyer than my brother.We like both sports, although he is more athletic（擅长运动的，活跃的） than me. He is more outgoinger，and I'm very quieter.I think I'm smarter than his. He run faster than me do . However We both enjoy go to parties. We like to do same things.
错文：There are many subjects at school,like Chinese math English science history and so on.I think the math is more difficult than Chinese.And English is more popular than Chinese.So I like English very much.science is also good.But I think history is more interesting than science.
My mother is taller than my father.I'm heavier than my brother.We both like sports,although（虽然） he is more athletic（擅长运动的，活跃的） than me. He is more outgoing（外向的，友好的），and I'm quieter.I think I'm smarter than him. However(然而）We both enjoy(喜欢）going to parties.(聚会）We like to do the same(相同的） things.2.My subject
正文：There are many subjects at school,like Chinese math English science history and so on.I think the math is more difficult than Chinese.And English is more popular than Chinese.So I like English very much.science is also good.But I think history is more interesting than science.
错文：
Hello everyone! My name is Wu Cao .How time fly! It was two years since I come to the high school. And I became taller and taller than before. Because of my hard study, I think that I'm smart than before. I made friends with my classmates ,so I become more and more popular in my class. Two years ago, I am a very shy boy ,but now I was more outgoing, because I often played basketball or soccer with schoolmates and I believe our friendship is forever. I also believe I am a better student than others because I usually help someone who is poor .
正文：
Hello everyone! My name is XXX .How time flies! It was two years since I came to the high school. And I become taller and taller than before. Because of my hard studying, I think that i'm smarter than before. I make friends with my classmates ,so i become more and more popular in my class. Two years ago, i was a very shy boy(Girl) ,but now i'm more outgoing, because I often play basketball or soccer with schoolmates and i believe our friendship will be forever. I also believe i am a better student than others because i usually help someone who is poor .
篇三：改错,作文
短文改错
I was recent told that listening to loud music is graduallymaking people hard of hearing. I'm sure it has already been happened to my neighbor. For years she has turned a deafear to my requests to turn her radio down. When she gave a party she isn't have to invite the rest of the street. Everyone can dance in her music in his own room. Now a scientist has discovered a certain electronic sounds have strange effects on rats. He declares they break down; almost paralyze(瘫) with legs trembled. Then it is simply a matter of throwing themout by their tail. I wonder if the same thing will happen tomy neighbor some day.书面表达
Can money buy happiness? 有人认为金钱是幸福，有人认为金钱不能买到很多珍贵的东西，比如时间和友情。作为高中生的你一定有自己的理解。请认真思考这句话，然后按要求用英语写一篇短文。
内容要求： 1. 你的观点； 2. 议论说明； 3. 恰当的结尾。
词数：120左右
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短文改错：
1. recent→recently 2.去掉been 3.√
4. gave→gives 5. isn't→doesn't 6. 第一个in→to 7. 去掉a
8. with后加their
9. trembled→trembling 10.tail→tails
书面表达
Can money buy happiness? Different people have different opinions.It is true that with enough money one can buy all the things one wants, and live a life of comfort and security. However, it is equally true that lack of money causes great distress. It is a common view that "money is the root of all evil." The pursuit of money drives many people to cheat and steal. In some places there is nothing that cannot be bought with money, resulting in corrupt societies where everybody is miserable.Money does not necessarily mean happiness. It all depends on how it is used. If we make honest and sensible use of money, it can be a stepping-stone to happiness. Although money cannot buy happiness, it can make happiness possible if it is employed sensibly.