篇一：大学校园是否能够骑自行车英语作文
Whether the campus should Cycling
Recently,Some schoolsprohibit students on campus bicycle, causing the students' heated discussion and student hold different views on this issue,some people think that should not ride a bike in the campus，because it will make the campus channel blocked，and affect the normal running of the school bus ,and the cyclist is too much, so collision events,but i think this is not a serious problem and and some consider is unnecessary,and riding a bicycle on campus has many benefits,such as environment friendly and can exercise the body and so on.
First of all,the environmental problems in our country is becoming more and more attention at present,The car will emit large quantities of gas and polluted environment,so government has strongly advocated green travel,Such as walking and cycling,cycling is a way of no pollution to the environment and can exercise，so this is a healthy way to travel,so we should advocate.
For the problem about bicycle will make the campus channel blocked,i think there are a lot of solutions,such as the school can set up a special location for bicycle parking,and can set up bicycle lanes,so it will not affect the normal running of the school bus,and during the peak periods like attend class and class is over,we should try to slow down ,in order to avoid a collision.
The current school is increasing scale,and more and more school
building than before ,also become more and more beautiful,but it also brings a lot of inconvenience ,such as distance between the various school buildings is far,and students need to often go to the convenience of supermarket near the school gate to buy necessities,so no transport is not convenient for travel,and i think this is a legitimate demand of students, schools should not prohibit.
To conclude,i think for the problem about schoolsprohibit students on campus bicycle,schools and students hold different views,they all have their own reasons,And now there are many ways to solve this problem,this will not only facilitate the school management of bicycle traffic and parking problems,but also meet the needs of the students' daily life, so we should coordinate with each other to find the best solution.
篇二：Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists
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问题作文
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
Nowadays,the university campus is being to a hot spot of tour.Increasing people want to have a visit on university campus due to kinds of reasons.However, whether the university campus should be open to tourists?The debate has been discussing in a long run.
People from different background have different conclusions.Some people hold the positive idea,and they think it is good for selection to university. But,others argue the university campus is the place students get knowledge.Thus it would disturb the quiet atmosphere of campus.
For me,I think we can organize people to have a view on campus in certain time,but don't turn campus to be a travel spot.The formost fuction of campus is to teach.Students,talents of our country,are the most important.
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切题度一般，加油
语言错误较少，加油
题目要求：录入内容
1. 名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2. 校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同
3. 我认为…
作文批改建议
Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?
第一段：
①Nowadays,the university campus is being to a hot spot of tour.
首先，大学校园是泛指概念，而不是特指概念，所以,the university campus不用the，而且要用复数形式,university campuses 。 虽说这里的hot spot 表达没有错误，但的第一次出现的“旅游热点”这个感念来说不够正式，而且“正在成为很流行的旅游景点”的表达不准确， are being more than popular attractions。这句话就改成了Nowadays，,university campuses are being more than popular attractions。 或者可以说：universities campuses are becoming tourist hot spots Nowadays换成presently、currently （in China），
②Increasing people want to have a visit on university campus due to kinds of reasons.
increasing的用法
increasingly是副词，此处修饰advertisements应该用形容词。但increasing领域的形容词increasing不能直接放在名词前修饰名词。当用increasing修饰名词表示“越来越”的时候长借助表达：名词（复数） in increasing
amount/numbers，这个表达还可以表达为an increasing number of + 名词（复数）。此处，increasing可以用mounting 、growing 、progressive来替换，表达含义都是一样的，表示“越来越”，用来替换常见表达 more and more。刚刚我们看的是“越来越”+ 名词的结构。接下来我们看看“越来越”+ 形容词的结构。这种结构最常见的表达是more and more + 形容词，比如“使这个世界表的更美好”就可以说“make the world more and more beautiful”。但此结构同样可以用increasing来替换，但在这里我们需要注意，修饰形容词要用副词，于是要用increasing的副词形式increasingly，结构为“increasingly + 形容词”。其中increasingly 可以用progressively 来替换，含义不变。那“使这个世界表的更美好”这句话就可以表达为“make the world
increasingly/progressively beautiful”.在这里要注意学会总结给大家讲的
“more and more”结构的替换结构。1. 修饰名词：an increasing、mounting 、growing 、progressive number of + 名词（复数） 或名词（复数） in increasing、mounting 、growing 、progressive amount/numbers 2.修饰形容词： “increasingly、progressively + 形容词”。写作中一定要注意写
作结构的多样性，所以在平时的写作练习中，一定要注意学会积累用多种举行表达同一含义。
university campus应该用复数university campuses
名词的裸奔：
③However, whether the university campus should be open to tourists? the university campus 改为university campuses
④The debate has been discussing in a long run.
discussing 改为被动 discussed
第二段：
①People from different background have different conclusions. backgrounds 用复数形式
②Some people hold the positive idea,and they think it is good for selection to university.
and they think it is good for the selection that university campuses should be open to tourists.
hold/think
assume,argue,maintain,reckon,ponder,consider,claim,等词来替换“认为” 其它常见的大便词汇的替换：
people individual citizenfolk folks
importantsignificant vitalcriticalcrucialindispensable good favorable有利的 rewarding有益的 beneficial
distinguished著名的positive
bad unfavorable dreadful可怕的adverse不利的 alarming令人担忧的disturbing令人不安的
many an ocean of numerous countless
③But,others argue the university campus is the place students get knowledge.
but 表转折，这里不准确，应该用“对比”关系的连词，while 或whereas while/whereas,others argue university campuses are the places in which（where） students get knowledge.
或改成：
篇三：英语作文：大学生活
After entering college, we found, to our surprise, that differences between high school life and college life are great. In high school, we always depended on our parents and teachers to solve all kinds of difficult problems. At college, however, we have to rely exclusively on ourselves. What＇s more, we have to learn how to get along with our classmates and roommates.
Four years at college is an important yet very short period of time in our life. So it is always expected that we adapt to this life as quickly as possible. But it is a pity that not everyone can do so immediately. Here are some suggestions.
First, get familiar with the main buildings on the campus. Spend one or two hours by yourself or with your classmates to go around the campus so that you can know the location of such important places as the library, the dining room, the post office, the clinic and classrooms. Next, try to be independent. Learn to do
such things as making sound decisions on how to spend your time, how to spend your money etc, and washing clothes on your own. Furthermore, form good study habits. Talk with your classmates and learn from their good habits. Finally, try to take part in all kinds of activities to get out of your solitude and get on well with your classmates 进入大学后,我们发现,令我们吃惊的是,高中生活和大学生活之间的差异是巨大的。在高中的时候,我们总是依赖我们的父母和老师来解决各种各样的难题。然而,在大学,我们必须完全依赖自己。更重要的是,我们必须学会如何相处与我们的同学们和室友。
大学四年是一个重要然而在我们的生活中很短的时间内。所以总是希望我们尽快适应这种生活。但遗憾的是,不是每个人都能这样做。这里有一些建议。
首先,熟悉主要的校园建筑。花一两个小时自己或和同学走在校园,这样您就可以知道的位置等重要场所,图书馆,餐厅、邮局、诊所和教室。接下来,要独立。学会做诸如声音决策如何花你的时间,如何花你的钱等,自己洗衣服。此外,养成良好的学习习惯。与你的同学交谈和学习的好习惯。最后,试着参加各种各样的活动让你的孤独,和你的同学相处得很好
Should College Students Be Allowed to Skip Classes?
Should college students be allowed to skip classes? Our school regulatiom handbook says no. However, in my opinion, college students should have the right to do so. First and foremost, we should bear in mind the purpose of students' attending classes—to gain more knowledge and skills. Generally speaking, going to classes is a good and irreplaceable way for students to obtain knowledge. However, sometimes students can benefit more if they skip certain classes, for example, when they are not in the right mood for classes at some particular moment, or when do need some sleep that provides them with necessary energy for more important things later that day, or when they have to do something more important at that specific time. That is to say, when students cannot learn efficiently in classes, why must they attend them? Of course, if students are not familiar with the content of the missed class, they should make up for it. Another reason why college students can skip classes is that some of them deem skipping class as a means of alternative education.(deem?as将?看作) Almost all the college students are over 18 and they have formed good sense
of judgement to consider what is good and what is bad for themselves. They know for what and for whom they are studying, and they are able to make sensible decision whether to skip a particular class or not. If they can learn better alone with a book in front of them instead of instructor, why should they be compelled to attend the class? The world today witnesses the “knowledge explosion”. Mountains of useful knowledge and information are waiting for young students to acquire or master, so they in dire need of effiency in learning. However, students are quite different intellectually—some are smarter than the others and they can learn more rapidly. On the other hand, teaching appraoches adopted by teachers are usually based on the level of the average students. The smart students feel the classes no challenge at all and they don’t want to see their time flow away without enough acomplished. So if it is a waste of time for them to go to certain classes, why must they attend them? On all accounts, college students should have the right to skip classes, and are not to blame by colleges and teachers
大学生应该可以逃课吗?大学生应该可以逃课吗?我们学校regulatiom手册说不。然而,在我看来,大学生应该有权这样做。首先,我们应该记住学生的目的参加类来获得更多的知识和技能。一般来说,类是一个很好的和不可替代的方式为学生获得知识。然而,有时学生受益更多,如果他们可以跳过某些类,例如,当他们不正确的情绪类在某些特定时刻,或什么时候需要一些睡眠,为他们提供必要的能源更重要的事情当天晚些时候,或者当他们不得不做一些更重要的是在那个特定的时间。也就是说,当学生不能学习高效课堂,他们为什么要参加?当然,如果学生不熟悉的内容错过类,他们应该弥补。为什么大学生会逃课的另一个原因是,他们中的一些人认为翘课作为一种替代教育。(认为…将…看作)几乎所有的大学生都是18岁以上,他们已经形成了良好的判断要考虑什么是好,什么是坏。他们知道什么和为谁学习,和他们能够做出明智的决定是否跳过一个特定的类。如果他们能学到更好的单独和一本书在他们面前,而不是教练,他们为什么要被迫参加的班呢?当今世界证人“知识爆炸”。山有用的知识和信息正在等待年轻学生获得或掌握,所以他们迫切需要学习的效益。然而,intellectually-some比其他人更聪明的学生有很大的不同,他们可以迅速了解更多。另一方面,教学appraoches教师通常采用基于学生的平均水平。聪明的学生觉得上课没有挑战,他们不希望看到他们的时间流没有足够的本地去。因此,如果他们是浪费时间去某些类,他们为什么要参加?总之,大学生应该逃课的权利,而不是指责由学院和老师
What can you do to make your college life colorful ?