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篇一:雅思小作文,如何写好图表雅思小作文

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这是一篇非常有用的关于IELTS小作文的文章,分享一下,希望对大家有帮助O(∩_∩)O~

I 数据图

一、介绍段introduction

介绍段内容几乎完全不用创新,就是对题目文字部分的第二段做改写,paraphrase the rubric。所谓改写,要么换词,要么换句式。

例如:(I4-100)

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK and most

(1)(2)

popular countries for UK residents to visit.

换 词

(1) 图 The charts 图:chart, graph, diagram(雅思写作中完全等价,无差别) 线:line / curve chart 柱图:bar / column graph 饼:pie diagra

雅思写作小作文

m 表:table / statistics / figures

(2) 动词“表明”give information about

介绍段是客观描述,用一般现在时态,give information about虽然在这篇作文中最好不再用,但是informal learning,随手学到的东东,留作其它文章再用。替换的词语和结构很多,比如我常用的reveal / indicate / demonstrate,大家也可以选几个自己喜欢并且拼写准确的形成风格,年轻时多尝试,年纪大了就要形成风格啦(O(∩_∩)O~),三个就够,多了白搭,还是那句话,博大不如精深。

第二段其余部分的替换因题而异,比如travel换成visit,the UK换成Britain(注意不是England,英格兰只是Britain的一部分,tester会生气的!),popular换成fashionable,country换成nation,UK residents to visit换成UK tourists。不过随着练习作文数量的增加,你会惊喜的发现,雅思图表作文,连描述的对象都是类似的。

换 句

(1)并列句

The line chart reveals that … and the bar graph indicates that …(分别描述两幅图,形成风格哦,第一幅图用chart,第二副图用graph,第一幅图reveal,第二副图indicate,)

(2)被动语态

… is revealed in the line chart and … is indicated in the bar graph.

One possible answer:

The line chart reveals visits to and from Britain and the bar graph indicates most fashionable nations for UK tourists in 1999.

二、主体段body

过渡: 段首过渡词(1个) 信息出处: According to the line chart, As is shown in the line chart, The line chart shows that … 表示逻辑: On the other hand等等 段内过渡词(1-2个) 顺承:also, besides, in addition 转折:however, on the other hand, conversely 其它:meanwhile / in the same time, similarly, in particular

句型:

简单线图:

趋势(包括升降速度):

1. The visits increased quickly from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 to 1999.

(1) (2)(3) (4) (5)

2. There was an increase in the visits from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 to 1999.(2a) (1) (4) (5)

(2a) (1) (6)(4) (5)

(1)主体:(第二段或图例中有明示)

同义词 travel

The travel increased quickly from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 to 1999.

代词 they

The visits increased quickly from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 to 1999. In particular,不同的线的英文名称 line

the thin(细线) / thick(粗线) / broken(虚线) / dotted(点线) line

The thin line, which represents visits by UK residents, increased from about 12 to 53 million from 1979 to 1999.

(2)增加/减少:动词 increase / decrease, rise/drop(可做名词) go up / come down climb / slide ascend / decline rocket / collapse(暴增/暴减) 过去的图表用一般过去时;一天24小时的图表用一般现在时。 (3)升降速度/幅度(去掉-ly就是形容词) 快:quickly / rapidly / swiftly 慢:slowly / gradually / steadily 大:greatly / vastly / considerably / substantially 小:slightly / marginally / minutely 数字副词: about / around / roughly / more or less 12 million (3)+(2a)增加/减少:名词 a sharp / slow / great / slight increase an upward / rising / increasing tendency a downward / falling / decreasing trend

(4)数字单位用单数

12 million而不是12 millions 一定要注意!

(5)时间

from … to … / between … and …

during the period from … to … / between … and … / starting from ….

show / prove / witness

(7)补充动词 keep / remain / maintain unchanged / constant / stable(保持不变) fluctuate upward / downward(波动向上/向下) double / triple / quadruple(2/3/4倍)

A possible answer: (Band 6.5)

According to the line chart, visits abroad by UK residents increased from about 12 to 57 period.

复杂线图:

极值: 峰值:peak (v. & n.), summit (v. & n.), highest point 谷值:touch the bottom (v.), nadir (n.), lowest point 稳定时期:plateau (n.高原), lower stationary phase (低稳时期)

A possible answer: (Band 6.5)

According to the curve chart, daily electricity need is higher in winter (38,000 units on average) than in summer (18,000 units on average). In winter, electricity consumption peaks at summer, it summits at 2:00 pm and 11:00 pm, but has a nadir at 9:00 am and a lower stationary phase from 4:00 pm to 9:00 pm.

简单柱图:

A possible answer: (Band 6.5)

The bar graph demonstrates that the most UK visitors went to France and Spain, which were (3.5 million) and Turkey (2.0 million).

复杂柱图:

比较:

90% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with only 10% of women.

More women held undergraduate diplomas (70%) and marginally more women reached degree level (55%).

Men with postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered their female counterparts (70% and 30% respectively).(摘自《剑桥雅思4》)

扇形统计图:无非是两个表达的组合“占”和百分比。

篇二:雅思小作文技巧及范文

雅思小作文写作技巧及范文

一.图表类型

饼状图,直方图或柱形图 趋势曲线图 表格图流程图或过程图 程序图

二.解题技巧

A. 表格图

1横向比较: 介绍横向各个数据的区别,变化和趋势 2纵向比较:介绍横向各个数据的

区别,变化和趋势 3无需将每一个数据分别说明,突出强调数据最大值和最小值,对比时要总结出数据对比最悬殊的和最小的

说明:考察例举数字的能力和方法。注意怎样通过举一些有代表性的数据来有效地说明问题。

B. 曲线图

1极点说明: 对图表当中最高的,最低的点要单独进行说明

2趋势说明: 对图表当中曲线的连续变化进行说明,如上升,下降,波动,持平

3交点说明:

说明:关键是把握好曲线的走向和趋势,学会general classification,即在第二段的开头部分对整个曲线进行一个阶段式的总分类,使写作层次清晰。接下来在分类描述每个阶段的specific trend,同时导入数据作为你分类的依据。注意不要不做任何说明就机械性的导入数据!可以使用一些比较native的单词和短语来描述trend。

C. 饼状图

1 2比较 3重点突出特点最明显的扇面:最大的,最小的,互相成倍的

D. 柱状图

1.比较: similarity 2.对比: difference)

3.横向总结所有柱状图表的共性特征 & 分别描写各个柱子的个性特征

E. 流程图

1. 2. 准备工作 3.

4. 5. 简单总结

说明:注意流程图里的“因果关系”或每一流程的“承前启后”关系;表达每一流程的主体内容,阐明这种关系;揭示其内在联系或规律;最后,给予简要归纳和总结。

F. 实物/器具工作过程 1. 2. 3. 4. 简单总结 G. 综合图

1不求甚解,不拘泥于细节2分门别类,分段落详细介绍各个图表 3不画蛇添足,主观臆断或猜测图表之间的关系

三.写作结构

框架结构

1. 开头:该图阐述的是______的______.共有以下几个部分组成。

shows (that) / According to / As (is) shown in … / As can be seen from /

It can be seen from / We can see from / It is clear / apparent from the figures/statistics / It is from / This …

2. 分析:首先看到的是____, 在_____年呈现出____的趋势 / 占______; 其次,……第三[比

较分析]

1)内容:figure、statistic、number、percentage、proportion

2)用语:

1

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四.有效词汇

上升:increase、rise、 ascend 、core、 surge 、go up 、climb 、mount、 level up

下降: decrease、 fall 、drop、 descend、 decline 、reduce 、lessen、 level down

平稳:stable 、steady、 remain/maintain/keep/be the same as/similar to

波动:fluctuate、 fluctuation、 rise and falls、 up and down

占:occupy、 take up、 account for、 gain

而:while、 howeve、r whereas、 on the other hand、 actually/in fact

相比:by contract、 on the contrary、 likewise、 compared with

最高点:the highest 、the top、 the summit 、the peak、 the most

最低点:bottom 、less 、least 、rock bottom

平均:mean、 average趋势:tendancy 、trend、 inclination 预见:prediction

达到顶峰: mount to 在***中占***:gain the percentage of

有一个稳定的过程:a stable period can be seen

五,经典范文

第一类:表格

Write at least 150 words.

Percentage of national consumer expenditure by category-2002

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The table gives the breakdown about data on consumer spending on various items (Food/Drink/Tobacco,Clothing/Footwear and Leisure/Education) in five different countries (Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey)in 2002.

Generally, each country consumed much more in food/drink/tobacco where Turkey dominated the first place with 32.14%, standing in marked contrast with Sweden (only 15.77%) than in other 2 categories. In terms of Clothing/Footwear, Italy expectedly spent most with 9% compared with still Sweden seeing the smallest proportion (5.4%). As for Leisure/Education, it was Turkey and Spain that consumed the most and least with 4.35% and 1.98% respectively.

Additionally, we can see immediately that in food/drink/tobacco, after Turkey, Ireland, Spain and Italy came in turn with 28.91%, 18.80% and 16.36%. On the contrary, in Clothing/Footwear, we failed to see big gap from Ireland,Spain and Turkey in middle positions which saw different reductions of 2.57%, 2.49% and

2.37% in comparison with Italy, likewise, in Leisure/Education, still small differences were found. To be exact, Turkey was followed by Sweden, Italy and Ireland in a slow falling turn with 3.22%, 3.2% and 2.21%.

In conclusion, people prefer to spend on those products directly relating to food. (189 words)

第二类:柱状图

The chart below shows

范文:

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The table shows that the figures for imprisonment in the five countries mentioned indicate no overall pattern of increase of decrease. In fact there is considerable fluctuations from country to country. in 1980. On the other hand markedly from 1930 to 1940. Since then they have increased gradually, apart from in 1980 is the only country in which the numbers in prison have decreased over the period 1930-1980, the greatest number of prisoners compared to the other four countries but population size needs to be taken into account in this analysis. The prison population in the United States increased rapidly from 1970 to 1980 and this must be a worrying trend.(169 words)

第三类:饼状图 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Units of electricity by fuel source in Australia

范文: compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. Between these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France. produced from natural gas, hydro power (each producing 20 units) and oil (which produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%. 5

篇三:雅思写作小作文范文下载

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摘要: 雅思写作小作文范文,大家都知道雅思写作有a类(学术类)和g类(移民类)之分,而且学术类和移民类又有大作文和小作文之分,之前小编整理了雅思写作大作文范文,本节呢小编又带来了雅思写作小作文范文,是不是很给力啊。快来拿高分吧。

雅思 写作小作文范文,大作文和小作文虽然只有一字之差,但是它们是有很大的区别的,侧重点和话题也都不相同,小编废话不多说,用范文来说话,如下请看:

第一部分:TASK1图表写作套句精选

1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。

2.the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了...

3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。

4.the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了...

5.the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了...

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。

7.the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明...

8.the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何...

9.the data/statistics show (that)... 该数据(字)可以这样理解...

10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论...

11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示...

12.according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)...

13.as is shown in the table... 如表格所示...

14.as can be seen from the diagram,great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出,...发生了巨大变化。

15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure,we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到...

16.this is a graph which illustrates... 这个图表向我们展示了...

17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。

18.the graph,presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。

19.this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图,描述了...

20.as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the flutuation of... 如图所示,两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。

21.over the period from...to...the...remained level. 在...至...期间,...基本不变。

22.in the year between...and... 在...年到...期间...

23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998... 1995年至1998三年里...

24.from then on/from this time onwards... 从那时起...

25.the number of...remained steady/stable from (month/year) to (month/year). ...月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。

26.the number sharply went up to... 数字急剧上升至...

27.the percentage of...stayed the same between...and... ...至...期间...的比率维持不变。

28.the figures peaked at...in(month/year) ...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点,为...

29.the percentage remained steady at... 比率维持在...

30.the percentage of...is sightly larger/smaller than that of... ...的比例比...的比例略高(低)。

31.there is not a great deal of difference between...and... ...与...的区别不大。

32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of... 该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。

33....decreased year by year while...increased steadily. ...逐年减少,而...逐步上升。

34.the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of[%]. ...的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点,为...百分点。

35.the figures/situation bottomed out in... 数字(情况)在...达到底部。

36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough. 数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。

37.a is ...times as much/many as b. a是b的...倍。

38.a increased by... a增长了...

39.a increased to... a增长到...

percentage. 比低高(低)

41.there is an upward trend in the number of... ...数字呈上升趋势。

42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from...to... ...到...发生急剧上升。

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