篇一：托福官方作文185题库范文【全】
目录
TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 思路＋范文 完美重排版 …………………………3
本部分填补了目前网络iBT 备考资料的空白。根据李笑来老师提供的作文思
路与《iBT 高分作文》原书范文重排。本部分对iBT 考试的独立写作部分与
口语部分均具有重要的参考作用。
范文中加粗部分均依为原书所有。
附录一 185 题库按关键词分类 …………………………………………184
照录原书附录
附录二 李笑来作文笔记（独立部分）…………………………………185
根据本人新东方听课详尽笔记整理而成
附录三 句法多样性专题 ………………………………………………193
摘自李笑来老师网站（www.xiaolai.net）
附录四 例证表达法 ………………………………………………………199
摘自李笑来老师网站（www.xiaolai.net）
时间匆忙，欢迎指出错误，将在后面的版本中修正。
感谢笑来老师给我们提供了如此之好的备考材料，一切版权归笑来老师所有。
仅供广大iBT 考生备考参考，建议购买原版以更好使用。
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1. Why people attend college?
People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences,
career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
『分析』
说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)：增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野
为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机
会 父母要求子女上大学 别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书 找不到工作
("无知"，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。上大学如是[1]，去博物馆如是[12]，从事危险
运动亦如是[43]。)
相关题目：[168]
『范文』
After graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work
force. Most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding
jobs (They attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for
advancement in an increasingly competitive job market. Before attending college, students have a
limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree a job applicant can be
competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science
degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well
prepared for
any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from,
degree holders
are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.
Additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For example,
many
companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher
salaries to attract
them. Even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores,
employers may still place
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a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a
well-known
university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of
competence in a
given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also
command higher
salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.
Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to
jobs with a
clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a
student to find a job
in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same
major could also
be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be
unavailable without
taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.
2. Are parents the best teachers? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents
are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
『分析』
因观点绝对而不能同意。
不是所有的父母都是好老师
最好的老师不仅仅是父母
有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知
z有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响
『范文』
Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are
generally most concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely
true to say that parents are the best teachers.
First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less
have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating
their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents. Another
deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of
education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream
by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do
not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In
fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses
Moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones.
When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of
teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school.
But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by
multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a
professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. No parent
is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. Wise
parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the
possibility outside the family.
Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts
of children education are virtually beyond teachers' reaches. It is parents that supplement.
Psychology studies have shown us that parents' love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to
their children. Albeit Einstein's mother and that of Forest Gump are both good examples. On the
other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The natures of
those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted.
In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.
3. Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
『分析』
总体上，―食物变得越来越容易准备‖是一种进步[37]，所以自然会带来improvement。使人们
的生活方式发
生了一些变化： 好的：
节省时间，越来越方便，一定程度上把妇女从繁杂的家务中解放了出来
也有不好的变化：
准备食物是一种重要的家庭活动，可是食物变得容易准备一定程度上使家人在一起的时间减
少
了，比如―速冻饺子‖[quick-frozen dumpling]
快餐业的高速发展的一个直接结果是，人们普遍变胖了，尤其是孩子
相关题目：[13]
『范文』
People today can prepare their meal much easier than has ever been before. To prepare a single
dinner,provident housewives usually had to work for hours in the past: they had to buy home dirty
vegetables which had to wash, meat which had to slice, and so on so forth. Each and every step of
preparation was a time-consuming task. But now, things are entirely different. Supermarkets
provide vegetables and meat clean and neat, some of them even have relevant ingredients and
need only a few minutes to be made into delicious meals. And this change has indeed greatly
improved the way people live. In a sense, food preparation is no longer a tedious task, at least
much easier to tolerate. Such a change has liberated many women and given them chance to do
more meaningful things, for example, a higher pay job or a more respectful one. On the other hand,
more men are becoming willing to do the thing that they once hated so much, and in some cases
such transformation of men brought dramatic positive impact on the family. Today, it's not hard to imagine a wife comes home after a day's hard work and how delightful she is to find out his husband has already prepared her several her favorite dishes! Children can more easily become independent—at least they can make themselves breakfasts or dinners when parents are
occasionally not present. But such a change has also brought some unexpected consequences. Girls nowadays are becoming more and more reluctant to deem household work as their
responsibility. The reason is quite straightforward: it was once really ridiculous to insist men do trivial household work rather than go work and earn money to support family, but conditions have altered now, girls might think: "I can work as well, or maybe I can earn a higher salary than you do, dear boy friend, if you want to marry me, answer me one question first, will you prepare me breakfast and dinner every day?" And some boys, on the other hand, are becoming hesitant to get married, or simply remain solitary, among miscellaneous reasons they do so is one thing: "I can take care of myself, at least I don't really need someone prepare me dinner!" Anyway, such a
change is positive and it did improve the quality of people's life. At least it has brought girls, boys, husbands, wives, children and everyone else who has to prepare food an opportunity, no matter what kind of
opportunity it is.
4. Which is more important, book knowledge or experience?
It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is
more important? Why?
『分析』
注意一定要先进行比较
从书本中获取的知识
优点：
题材、范围更多
有更多的深度
更加的系统
缺点：
有时过于教条
也不见得完全准确
从经验中获取的知识
优点：
获取直接、简单明了
更加地实用
有些知识无法从书本中获得
缺点：
不系统，很大的随意性
很容易产生片面理解
不一定要说A比B更重要，或者B比A更重要。也可以选择在不同的情况下，有不同的比较。学习抽象
的知识，书本是最好的来源。学习游泳，这只能靠经验。另外，大多数的知识要书本经验相结合才可
以。
相关题目：[116]
有些科目或者知识适合通过实践学习，比如，语言，体育
有些科目或者知识适合通过阅读学习，比如，物理、化学、历史、地理
有些科目或者知识适合通过与别人交流来学习，比如销售技巧；管理技巧
所以不能一概而论(treat different things/problems/matters] as the same)，要看学什么，以及学习的阶段。
『范文』
In general, knowledge gained from books has a wider range than that gained from experience. We now live in a world that typophile is no longer exorbitant, and that printed matters are readily available. In libraries, we can learn nearly everything only if we have already acquired basic
reading skills, philosophy, history, literature, physics, mathematics, chemicals, biology, geography, anthropology, and the list will go on. Unlike the experience of an individual that is limited by the range of that individual, books seem to have almost no limitation. Sitting in the local library, we virtually can travel everywhere through an interesting geographic encyclopedia, and certainly, with nearly no expense at all. On the other hand, it can be argued that sometimes knowledge
gained from experience is much deeper and more comprehensive than that gained from books. It is quite true that not every thing is contained in books. How to deal with personal finance, how to cope with current social trends, even how to most effectively organize our own mind, and
numerous other things can seldom be found thoroughly and comprehensively discussed in books, we have to gain the knowledge by our own experience. And the sad news is that even some knowledge that is contained in books usually needs further comprehension, mainly through experience. As to which source is more important, the answers vary. Some knowledge can be acquired only through books. It's hard to imagine we can have a good understanding of history without reading books. On the other hand, some knowledge can be obtained only through experience. When we try to learn to swim, merely a detailed manual of swimming skills, even abundantly filled with illustrations, is at most useless. We have to jump into the water and then gain the knowledge with experience. We have to use books and experience as source
simultaneously to get what we want to know. Take learning physics for example, both books and experiences are equally important sources, and examples as such are numerous. Therefore, I think whether one source is more important than the other depends on circumstances.
5. The advantages and disadvantages of a new factory near your community
A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the
factory? Explain your position.
『分析』
先讨论―假设工厂真的落成了，而带来的好处和坏处‖，而后发表看法。
好处：
直接增加了就业机会(到工厂去上班)；间接增加了就业机会(会有很多服务业，比如饭店、商店、
超市等等跟着开业)
如果工厂规模足够大，物流规模也足够大，那么将最终成为交通改善的起点
大的工厂可以缴纳很多税，对地方财政有好处，进而促进社区的繁荣
篇二：新托福写作真题及范文汇总(2013—2014)
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新托福写作真题及范文汇总(2013—2014)
摘要： 新托福写作真题及范文汇总(2013—2014)!新托福写作分为综合写作及独立写作，两者难度都很大中间还涉及有听力的考察，同学们在备考的时候无疑难度比较大，因此小编给大家整理出一份比较好的资料新托福写作真题及范文汇总内容，同学们可以参考下。
新 托福 写作真题及范文汇总(2013—2014)! 新托福 写作分为综合写作及独立写作，两者难度都很大中间还涉及有听力的考察，同学们在备考的时候无疑难度比较大，因此小编给大家整理出一份比较好的资料新 托福写作 真题及范文汇总内容，同学们可以参考下。
新托福写作真题及范文汇总(2013—2014)具体内容如下：
1
综合写作
passage 讲了三种可能的理论来解释一次物种大灭绝
1. sea level decline 造成 coast living 灭绝。
2. cool climate,主要是火山活动造成的 SO2 增多,导致地球变冷。
3. asteroid strikes,产生的 cater 使植物得不到足够的 sunshine,也是恐龙灭绝的原因。
listening 里的 professor 进行一点一点的否决:
1. 她说 sea level 在那个时候是 fluctuate,但是很 graduate,所以对 coast living 造不成影响
因为它们能适应环境的变化。
2. SO2 虽然能使地球变冷,但是大气中的 SO2 不怎么多,而且还为变成酸雨降到地面上。
3. asteroid 撞击地球是在 12 million year ago(好像是,不太确定没在作文里写),在生物大灭绝
之前发生,和这次没任何关系。
主题：一次物种大灭绝的原因
阅读的观点：
1. 海平面上升造成沿海生物灭绝
2. 火上活动造成二氧化硫增多，导致地球变冷。
3. 小行星的撞击产生使得植物得不到足够阳光，恐龙赖以为食的植物无法正常生长使得恐
龙灭绝。
听力的观点：
1. 当时海平面是波动的，而且海平面上升是一个渐进的过程，很难对沿海生物造成影响因
为他
2. 大气中的 SO2 不多,而且还为变成酸雨降到地面上。
3. 小行星撞击地球是在 12 million year ago(好像是),在生物大灭绝之前发生,和这次没任何
关系。
第三点：错误的因果关系
2
阅读文章 deep--‐sea mining
1. 论述 mining 的 metal 是适合的
2. 论述 metal 的污染问题 0T
3. 论述 mining 的管制法制问题
讲座反驳：
1.volcanic mining 出来的 metal 不一定 available，目前的技术不够好，collect and
transportation 技术都不好
2. 即是 metal 只污染 2 公里以内的，但是污物业会 drift back 回 动物还是会受影响
3. 虽然现在很多 law 管制，而 coast 属于某一个国家。international agency &law 只对公海有效，对 coast 无效吧。
3
Primary care doctors
美国的初级医护人员
阅读
20，000 primary care doctors are in shortage in America, there are three reasons
1, 上医学院学费贵，学生需要贷款，毕业之后 primary doctors 的工资低，不够还贷款
2，P C doctors 压力大， 工作时间长，看的病人多，没人愿意干这个工作
3，the opportunities to get trained are limited. 毕业后要培训三年才能上岗，但是 residency
position 不多，导致很多学生毕业后得不到培训，之后他们就延迟培训或者该行
听力
这些问题都有解决方法
1，学生入学时承诺毕业后在 primary care field 干，政府就会给他们提供帮助，比如帮助附
贷款或者提供奖学金
2，可以培训护士，让她们承担一部分医生的工作，比如开药方，这样医生压力就减少了
3，美国颁布了一个法律，规定如果毕业生三年里都没有接受培训，政府就会把他们安排到
其他医院，这些医院有 residency positions
总体比较简单，阅读没有什么生词，听力听得也很清楚，主要是最后一个论点，由于读文章
时只关注记题了，第三个论点细节没怎么看，导致听力第三个论点听得也不是很清楚，后来
阅读又出来的时候，又细细的看了阅读，然后根据听力听到的内容自己组织了下语言。用了模板，280 个字左右。
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篇三：托福作文题目及范文
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托福作文题目及范文
摘要： 托福作文题目及范文！写作考试需要考生们对材料知识能够充分掌握，而且文章要能够有特点。小编为同学们整理了2013年1月13日托福独立写作题目以及范文，供大家参考使用。
托福 作文题目及范文。写作考试需要考生们对材料知识能够充分掌握，而且文章要能够有特点。小编为同学们整理了2013年1月13日托福独立写作题目以及范文，供大家参考使用。
2013年1月13日托福独立写作题目
Question ：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Making sure that people such as the manager or your
supervisor know your strengths and accomplishments can help you succeed. Other wise you cannot achieve anything.
托福作文真题答案
独立写作：
范文
It is important to make sure that others know about your strengths and accomplishments; if you are not so,you will be never successful in life.
If people are unaware of your talents and other good qualities, you obviously will not stand out among your peers. To be successful you not only have to work hard, but you have to make sure others know you work hard, as well. Of course you should let others know of your strength and accomplishments, but the best way to let them know is by showing, not by just telling.
College applications-or applications of any kind-are a perfect example. Colleges want what kind of student you are and what kind of student you will be in college. You must show them that you are a good student and that you are interested in whatever you want to study. But in the essay, you cannot just state that you are a good student, are hardworking, and enjoy mathematics; you must show them. If you are interested in mathematics, then you probably did something in high school related to mathematics, such as the math club. In your essay, you must be sure to mention your participation in math club, but also activities your math club in order to show colleges that you will be active in your mathematics major. If you simply state that you like math, colleges will not be as impressed.
It is important to let others know of your achievements; otherwise you will not be successful in life. The field of science can provide many examples of the validity of this statement. In science, communicating your discoveries is as important as discovery things in the first place. Everybody knows that the scientists Watson and Crick discovered the double-helix structur
Granted, there is a fine line between letting people know about your accomplishments and simply showing off.
Nobody likes a show-off, so you must be careful not to rub people the wrong way with your success. People always say that actions speak louder than words, which is good advice to keep in mind when you are trying to let other people
know of your success. Don't just tell people you're good at writing. Start a blog and show people how accomplished of a writer you are.
The key to success is to play to your strengths and to not be shy about showing other people your talents. (460 words)
上述就是小编为同学们介绍的托福作文题目及范文。希望考生们在看了之后，能够多去掌握一些素材，考试的时候就能够用上了。祝大家考试顺利!
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