篇一：2016托福写作
the following statement?Students should arrive school early in the morning.
2016-1-23
Some people believe that video games could inspire young students’ interest and make their study more efficient rather than distracting them and a waste of time, so young students should be allowed to play video games.
2016-1-24
In times of an economic crisis, in which area should governments reduce its spending?
1.Arts
2.Scientific research
3.Parks and public gardens.
2016-2-27
High school students should be required to study many different subjects at same time or they should study only three or four subjects at a time.
2016-2-28
Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games for fun and entertainment; playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children’s development.
2016-3-11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Students do reading by their own is as important as or more important than the reading teachers assigned.
2016-3-13
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
After high school, students should have at least one year to work or travel. It is better than attending university straight away.
2016-3-19
The club of your school plans to help one of the following group of people:
1.teach pupils reading and math
2.build house for those who cannot afford the house
3.take care of old
2016-3-26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is often not a good city to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose touch with old friends.
2016-4-9
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends your same age.
2016-4-23
Getting advice from people who are older than you is more valuable than from people of your age.
Which do you prefer with the same rate of pay, an increasing and challenging job with less vacation or a job with more vacation time but less fun?
2016-5-22
As the leader of a city, what would you do to ensure the prosperity and success of the city?
1.creating job opportunities for the unemployed
2.lowering food price
3.providing affordable housing
2016-5-28
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The movies are worth watching only if they can teach something in real life.
2016-5-29
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better for elders to take risks and explore new things than young people.
2016-6-4
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The most important thing the government should do to improve health care is to clean the environment.
2016-6-25
What is the most important action for the government to take for the protection of environmental problems?
1.fund researchers on new energy sources such as solar and wind power
2.protect forests and natural wildlife species
3.pass and enforce laws to reduce the pollution
2016-7-3
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Competition among friends usually has a negative influence with friendship.
2016-7-9
Would you prefer a higher pay job with longer work time or an average pay job with normal work time. 2016-7-16
Do you agree or disagree: the universities should spend more money in improving facilities (libraries, computer labs) than hiring famous teachers.
2016-8-20
(A/D)Spending a long time in making an important decision is often considered as a bad quality. However, some people think that it is a good quality for a person.
2016.8.21
Some believeswe should stay far away from the people we care about, because it is necessary for people to understand the importance of relationship of people we care about, while others think being away from people we care about can damage our relationships with them.
2016-8-27
A/D: It is more important to read and watch news presented by people whose opinion is different from your own view than by people whose opinion are similar to yours.
2016-9-3
What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?
1. Plant trees and create parks
2. Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers
3. Increase access to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads
2016-9-10
The government should offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost.
2016-9-10下午
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: primary schools should spend more time on teaching young students (5-11years old) technology (like computer) than teaching music and art. 2016-9-11
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: One can learn a lot about another person from the books and the movies that the person likes.
2016-9-24
Your job has more effects on happiness than your social life does.
2016-9-25
You school want to improve the quality of students’ life in the dormitory. Which one of the following do you think the school should build in dorms
1.Quiet study area
2. exercise room for students to keep physical well-being
3. room for entertainment
201610-15
Young people should try different jobs before they take a long-term career.
2016-10-16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Many schools require young children (aged 5-11) to work together in a small group instead of working alone to learn man activities.
201610-22
Some teenagers take part in kinds of activities, such as musical classes, sports classes and so on, but others only focus on one activity which is important to them. Which idea do you support?
2016-10-28
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier for parents to raise their children than 50 years ago.
2016-10-29
It’s more important to use your own knowledge and experience than ask others’ knowledge and experience to solve problems.
2016-11-5
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：students should be encouraged to take courses like science, technology, engineering and math that are likely to lead to job opportunities rather than subjects they might be interested in.
2016-11-12
People can solve important problems in their daily life on their own or with the help from families; The help from the government is not necessary
.2016-11-13
Some believe that teachers (for students from age 14-18) should focus on lecturing and asking students to take notes during lectures. Others believe that teachers should get students involved in discussion and encourage them to exchange ideas in class. Which way of teaching do you think is more effective for students’ learning?
2016-11-19
Some people like to study alone while other prefer to study in a group. Which one do you think is more effective?
2016-11-26
Nowadays it is easier to be an educated person than it was in the past.
2016-12-3
Nowadays people are more willing to help the people they don’t know(for example, giving clothing and food to the people who need them) than people were in the past.
2016-12-10
Do you think that it is better for to travel abroad when you’re younger or older.
篇二：2016托福写作必知三大技巧
txt">托福写作是复习托福考试时比较难啃的骨头，在备考中需要掌握一定的练习技巧。托福写作有3大技巧：把握选词的准确性;明确写作立意;排除异己。至于这三个技巧是什么含义且如何去把握，下面我们详细介绍一下。托福写作技巧-——把握选词的准确性
1.选词时要符合语言习惯并与社会文化诸多背景一致
例如，英美人对landlord和peasant两词的理解与中国人截然不同。英美人对前者的理解首先是“房东”，然后才是“地主”;而 peasant一词对他们来说意味着“粗俗”与“无知”，此词多少带有贬义色彩。再如propaganda一词在中国并不带有西方人所理解的贬意;而 First lady (第一夫人)绝不能理解为汉语的原配夫人，因此在写作中应特别注意这类词，否则会导致冒犯和误解。
2.在英语写作中特别要注意区分同义词，选词时要考虑主题、对象及情景
由于历史的原因，现代英语除本族语外，还包括大量的法语和拉丁来源的饲，这就使英语的同义词相当丰富。总的来讲，英语本族语大多是短词，小词，听起 来朴素)亲切，大量用于口头表达：法语来源的词庄重文雅，多与行政、宗教、军事、服饰等有关;拉丁来源的词，书卷味浓，如 ask，question，inter-rogate这三个不同来源的同义词在不同的主题、对象、情景下用法就不一样。同义词除了来源的不同会影响措词的 选择外，它们在程度、感情色彩上也有不同。
3.措词选择应把握好英语和汉语词汇无法对应的部分
不是所有的英语词汇都有相应的汉语表达，一些不同的英语词汇也有可能用同样的汉语来表达，这就使我们在用英语来表达思想对面临更多选择上的困难。比 如family和home两词都可译成汉语的“家”，但它们却不是同义词。Family主要指家庭成员，与人有关，而home主要指所居住的地点、住宅。
托福写作技巧-——明确写作立意
1.要与论题相匹配。若论题问的既然是提高生活质量与否，一些无关紧要的改变就应该弃之不用，比如烹调时间缩短这一项改变，是事实，且未对生活质量有直接明显影响，就应该避免用作主要论点。
2.要能言之有物。这是再功利不过的一条标准。比如我自己提到了食物准备时间缩短能让人性情改变，破题时觉得不无可能，真落笔时却不知道由何说起， 如果选了这一条为一个主要论点，结果是我说了一句话就走人，那还不如选个能下笔，能展示语言功底，也能显示思维缜密的写作方向。
3.选择的无论是2个还是3个论点，内在一定要有联系。这其实是整个立意阶段的重头。要立意，就是要明白自己表达的对象是什么，明确立场。然后站在这个立场上，挑选支持自己的论点。
托福写作技巧-——排除异己
1.确定观点后，破题时得到的思维方向，明显不利于我的就应该排除。比如营养价值改变这一条，虽然速食文化的确对人体有害，但另一项速食：生疏和熟 粗粮，就是向有益方向改变的，两者势均力敌，仅管是很容易想到，也很容易举例论证的论点，却不宜使用，因为如此贸然用了，有思维不缜密之嫌。
2.托福写作考试发散思维时，思维如洪水，席卷一切进入视野的可用之材，但大浪淘尽后，选择时就要格外注意这些素材的特征属性，看准了着手点才能下手。
3.在挑选论点，寻找言之有物这个“物”的时候，一定要注意避免层面的交叉，而这个层面，也要从托福写作题目中来。破题时给出的方向只是方向，不是成熟的论点。有需要时，可以把匹配的几个方向糅合成一个论点，方便下笔。
篇三：整理打印版-无老师iBT新托福作文巨讲堂-(2015年01月-2016年2月)
ople from their labor and put machines and computers in places which employees originally occupy. It is a common phenomenon now that tremendous farm land are being well organized under the control of merely its owner taking advantage of the most advanced machines. Also, factories that ―hires‖ computers to manage the mass production is no longer news. Neither of these seemed even possible only decades ago, but they now obvious examples of how a bussiness could be run without employees.无老师优秀翻译：这个说法不成立的另外一个原因是在于，它忽略了不断发展的现代科技，他把我们人类从繁重的体力劳动之中解放出来，让机器和电脑代替了原来雇工做的事情。要知道，现在很多农场主，仅仅是通过最先进的机器就能很好的管理自己巨大的农场了。同时，那些雇佣电脑来管理生产线的工厂，已经不是很新鲜了。但是这些在10年前都是不可能的，但是在今天，他们都成了，公司如何在没有很多员工的情况下，运营的最为明显的例子了。
本段，一共就4句。第一句，优秀范例：Another reason why the statement is false is that it neglects the growing power of modern technology, which releases people from their labor and put machines and computers in places which employees originally occupy.对比平庸范例This statement is wrong, and the another reason for this is that it can not see the technology is developing, and it liberates our human from hard work, and it makes machines and computers do the jobs that people do.从开头我们就一下能辨别出优秀范例，与平庸范例的差别，在这里平庸范例的This statement is wrong，几乎就是字对字的把单词堆砌起来的，但是优秀范例首先一个another即显示出本段是承接上一段进行进一步论述的，这一点，平庸范例根本显示不出来。其次，优秀范例对于表示对一个观点的否定的时候，用的也是false，而不是比较口语的wrong。接下来，优秀范例，在表达忽略的时候用的也是neglect，也是很书面化，加分！不仅如此，接下来，优秀范例用的growing power写的也是很贴切，而不是像平庸范例写的technology is developing句型写的这么简单和常见。而在这个时候，如果我们跳到更高的高度的话，还会发现优秀范例的Another reason why the statement is false is that it neglects这个句型一气呵成，逻辑衔接得非常好，我们可以直接抄下来，当作常用加分句式。
后半句，优秀范例选词其实一般，但是两个固定搭配很好，首先是releases ….. from…..用的很好，第二个是put ……. in places,两个固定搭配看似平庸，但是当我们把真正的平庸范例makes machines and computers do the jobs，拿过来的时候，我们就会发现，原来优秀范例写的颇有一些文绉绉的感觉！也就是把你提走了不说提走了，而是说找人替代了你的位臵，言下之意，也就是这里不需要你了。而且优秀范例最后用的employees originally occupy，这里的originally occupy用的特别好，首先originally，那就说明，now，这里已经没有你的位臵了。然后occupy，对应前面的place，颇有前后呼应的感觉。至于平庸范例do来，do去的，过于口语化。
第二句，优秀范例It is a common phenomenon now that tremendous farm land are being well organized under the control of merely its owner taking advantage of the most advanced machines.对比平庸范例We all know that many farm owners are managing their farms by the most advance machines.优秀范例的It is a common phenomenon now that显得非常的书面，颇有一种―纵观古今，我们都知道这样一个道理‖的大会作报告的感觉扑面而来！赞~\(≧▽≦)/~ ！至于平庸范例的We all know that，就好像是―大伙想想，是不是这个理‖口语化倾向很浓厚。接下来的tremendous farm land也就是还好。但是后面的一连串组合拳很漂亮，首先是are being well organized强调现在已经是正在实行的情况，其二，under the control of merely its owner，用介宾短语under+名词结构，而不是用很僵化的by doing。而且优秀范例最后还用了伴随状语taking advantage of，使得句式很多样化，而且其本身还是一个固定搭配take advantage of，更是给自己加分！
第三句，优秀范例Also, factories that ―hires‖ computers to manage the mass production is no longer news.对比平庸范例At the same time, it is not new that many people are using computers to manage the factories.这里优秀范例很俏皮的用了hires，而不是buy，第一点与前面的取代了人的位臵相呼应，因为hire只能hire人，但是在这里hire的是computers，其实就是在强调computers取代了人的位臵。其次，mass production没有用常见的factory production，亦或者assembly line，不见得有多好，但是代表自己掌握的单词量很丰富，这也是给自己加分的。而且最后的no longer news也得很漂亮，用否定的方式，来表达肯定的意思，这个东西已经不新鲜了，也就是已经司空见惯了，更证明自己的论述很有道理。
最后一句，优秀范例Neither of these seemed even possible only decades ago, but they now obvious examples of how a bussiness could be run without employees.对比平庸范例But they are imposibble in many years ago, but today, they are the most obvious examples of how a company run without many people.首先，作者将否定词Neither放臵于句首，而不是像平庸范例一样用imposibble来表示否定，比较新颖，本身就使得句式与众不同，加分！然后，表示几十年之前，也没有用many years ago这样很常见的方式，而是直接秀了一下词汇量，用了decade这个词―10年‖，词汇量赞！最后的亮点，就是在于but they now obvious examples of这个链接的很好，首先用they，呼应前文，然后用obvious examples of引导出自己的例子来支持自己的观点，浑然天成！而且优秀范例最后还用到了employee这个词，看似平淡无奇，但是反观平庸范例的用的是many people，顿觉得优秀范例用词准确。
only in the future, but also today,– at this very hour, at this very minute, at this very second. Without satellites, an Australian could never be able to, say, take a day off, be a couch potato, watch a football game on the opposite side of the planet. With satellites, never will a Chinese professor travel by air to an academic meeting in America, and still step out of the plane with a trembling hand.
无老师优秀翻译：我支持空间技术的另外一个原因是：他不仅未来对于地球的定居者有好处，而且今天也是，在每一小时，每一分，甚至每一秒。没有卫星，一个澳大利亚人根本就不可能放一天假，看一整天电视，在地球的另一端看足球比赛。有了卫星的帮助，一个中国教授就不用再飞去美国参加学术会议，带着（因为劳累）而颤抖的双走走出机舱了。
无老师精析：不同的优秀文章，各有各的不同。本篇的优点就在于句式的丰富多样性，有排比，有倒装，断句的很清爽，让人读起来丝毫没有压力！怎一个爽字了得，而且还有couch potato这样的地道用语，简直就像是听看一场道地的讲座。点个赞！
首先第一句，优秀范例Another reason why I advocate for space technology is that it does good to dwellers on earth not only in the future, but also today,– at this very hour, at this very minute, at this very second.对比平庸范例Another reason why I support the space technology is that it will not only good to the people on the earth in the future, but also today, at each hour, at each minute, and at each second.优秀范例真的是要星星眼！写的太赞了！首先Another reason why I advocate for，一气呵成，拿来当模板用！赞~\(≧▽≦)/~ ！然后第二大亮点是强调句式does good ！加分！平庸范例就丝毫没有体现出这层意思！第三点用词准确dwellers，特质当地的居民，而不像是平庸范例的people那么泛泛。第四点not only为了配合but also而特意放在句子末端，而不是像平庸范例那样放在句子中段，狂点赞！尤其是优秀范例最后的部分，一连串并列at this very hour, at this very minute, at this very second步步递进！大赞的模板句！而且还加上了very这样的强调句式！真的是振聋发聩！一句话集齐32个赞，晋级！
第二句，优秀范例Without satellites, an Australian could never be able to, say, take a day off, be a couch potato, watch a football game on the opposite side of the planet.对比平庸范例：If we do not have a satellite, an Australian can not have a holiday to watch the football game in his coach in the other side of the earth.首先优秀范例简洁的Without satellites，一个回合就KO了平庸范例臃肿的If we do not have a satellite,然后再接下来，优秀范例的节奏感特别好，首先―, say,‖一个插入语，轻轻敲起，就像是架子鼓在远方点燃我们的激情，然后take a day off又是一个逗号―,‖，其后―be a couch potato‖后面又是一个逗号，凌厉的三板斧，做得漂亮！不仅如此，这两个小短句还写的很地道，前面表示―休假‖没有用holiday，而是用了固定搭配take a day off，其后的couch potato更是地道的用法，专指那些堆在沙发里看电视的胖子，最后on the opposite side of这里的opposite也是的很准确，指的是地球完全相反的另一段，而不像是平庸范例那样的other side，―另一端‖是完全相对的，还是靠着我们的？表达的就完全没有opposite side这么准确。
第三句，优秀范例With satellites, never will a Chinese professor travel by air to an academic meeting in America, and still step out of the plane with a trembling hand.对比平庸范例If we have a satellite, a Chinese professor will not fly to the United States to join in an academic meeting, and walk out the plane with shaking hands.首先平庸范例If we have a satellite就又是完败给了优秀范例的With satellites，然后优秀范例竟然用起了必杀技never will a Chinese professor——倒装句！加分！而且优秀范例的―乘飞机‖也没有用平庸范例的fly to ，而是用了travel by air，稍有加分。至于优秀范例的still这个词和后面的a trembling hand用得很有画面感，小伙伴们可以体会一下。^_^至于平庸
范例的shaking hands写的就不好了，因为会产生―握手‖的歧义。
companies who are originally, in many cases, poor in money but sharp in mind start their empire by simply running on foot delivering mails or collecting wastes. Bill Gates left Harvard for his promising business, which, at that time, was hardly a company, with only a friend and intelligent ideas. Similarly, Buffet‘s first buisiness was simply renting an old-fashioned game machine to passing people and obviously it was impossible for him to hire an employee.
无老师优秀翻译：在每一个公司的早期，雇员都是不必要的。公司最初的创办者，在很多情况下，都是缺少资金的，但是思想上的锋利让他开启了自己的商业帝国，仅仅通过送货赚钱，亦或者是捡拾垃圾。当比尔盖茨为了自己宏伟的商业帝国从哈佛退学的时候，在那时，还不能说是一个公司，他仅仅有一个志同道合的朋友和一个伟大的创意。与之相似的是，巴菲特的第一个公司也仅仅是把过时的游戏机租给路人，显然，他也不能雇佣员工。
第一句，优秀范例In the early periods of almost every bussiness, employee is not a neccesity.对比平庸范例At the begining of each company, employee is very important.在本句之中，优秀范例有两大优点，第一点是描写的很细致，也就是在本句话的开头，不仅用early做了限定，而且还用了almost every进行了限定，这就使得本句话的细节非常的丰富，这就好比是，你问我爱你有多深，如果你直接回答，非常爱你，那就没有力度，但是如果你回答，你是我的优乐美，那么对方就感觉很温暖，是一个道理，第二大优点就在于作者又用了形容词的名词化neccesity，本来是该用necessary的，但是作者在这里掉一下书袋，故意写的很书面化，没有用形容词，而是用了名词neccesity，这就写得很漂亮。
第二句优秀范例：Founders of companies who are originally, in many cases, poor in money but sharp in mind start their empire by simply running on foot delivering mails or collecting wastes.对比平庸范例The people who build the company is very poor, but they are very smart, and they can start their own business, by sending things, or finding wastes.首先说关联，本局之中，优秀范例首先用了Founder与companies，这样呼应前一句的bussiness，起到了关联的作用，表明这两句话说的是相同主题。之后，再来看这句优秀范例，首先作者当表达―创始人‖的时候，没有十分笨拙的，像平庸范例一样用The people who build the company，而是直接用了一个Founders来表达，简练，直接，然后又用了originally表达―最启示‖的状态，而不是土土的用一个at the beginning，然后为了增加自己说话的严密性，优秀范例又用了in many cases，表示―大多数情况下‖。
接下来，优秀范例用了一个poor，看似平常，但是在后面又加入了in money，因为poor既可能表示穷困，也可能表示贫乏，比如说思想的贫乏，这里加入in money，限定的就很准确，而且一定程度上，还克服了poor有些口语化的问题，接下来作者妙笔出现！前面poor in money一抑，后面but sharp in mind一扬，节奏感超棒！充分突出了Founders思想上的锐利！然后优秀范例没有继续用company亦或者business，而是用了empire―帝国‖一个词就描绘出建立的公司的庞大规模！十分到位！至于最后的foot delivering mails，就必须要感叹作者描绘的准确性，用foot限定delivering mails，显示出创业的艰辛。
第三句，开始举例了，优秀范例Bill Gates left Harvard for his promising business, which, at that time, was hardly a company, with only a friend and intelligent ideas.对比平庸范例When Bill Gates give up schools for his own business, at that time, it is not a company, he only has a good friend, and a good idea.显然作者最出彩的就是用词的准确性上！一次点睛之处处处可见！首先用Bill Gates与前文的Founders of companies呼应，然后用了一个promising―非常有前途‖，一词点出大业在前，马上成功的感觉！然后接下来，作者为了避免句式过于单一，于是在which这个从句中插入了at that time，调整句子节奏，然后一个hardly用的很巧妙！表示―这几乎还不能算是个公司‖，这里就引起了作者的好奇心，那么他有什么呢？最后用with only a friend and intelligent ideas揭开谜底，原来是有一位志同道合的朋友，和一个聪慧的见解。
最后一句，优秀范例Similarly, Buffet‘s first buisiness was simply renting an old-fashioned game machine to passing people and obviously it was impossible for him to hire an employee.对比平庸范例Just the same, Buffet‘s first company is selling old game machines to the people who walk around, and obviously he could not have an employee.首先，优秀范例先亮出Similarly，表示与前文相似，亦是表明本句话与前一句话一样的，都是举例，然后再亮出Buffet，显示出与前文的Bill Gates是相对应的。然后又用simply，显示出这里的Buffet的特点，也与Bill Gates是一样的，
就是初创阶段极为简单！然后接下来用了old-fashioned，秀一下自己的阅读量！与平庸范例单纯一个old是大不相同的！我的词汇量大很多！然后优秀范例甩出一个passing people，与前面的old-fashioned异曲同工，也就是没看到，还真不确定该怎么说，但是一旦看到，就觉得就应该这么说，就是这个意思！
在最后阶段，两处两点impossible for somebody to do something这个固定搭配，想想我们平时用了无数次的can not，顿觉得，还是有些新意的。最后，hire不见得用的多好，而使用的很准确，对比平庸范例的have，顿觉得have这个词用的太宽泛了！不准确，在表达―雇佣‖的时候，就该用hire。
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No matter how the impact it occurred, from the moment of its very advent, scientific research had become the very dictator of our future. It is by these researches that human beings, the only creature with intelligence on the earth, began to beat their wings of aspiration. And more importantly, it had indeed done a great good for the humankind. Can you imagine getting access to the world wide web at your desk after rising in the morning without the research of millions of computer ancestors? Similarly, it is highly probable that the great-grandchildren of your great-grandchildren would be enjoying a trip across the ―worm hole‖ while giving thanks secretly to his forefather, you, who voted for the expenditure on scientific research. In a word, the space project enjoys great potential, and should therefore be taken into account in top priority to ensure a better future of mankind.
无老师优秀翻译：我倾向于太空技术的最主要的原因，是在于科学研究的潜力。无论他已经产生了怎样的影响，从他出现的第一天起，科学研究就成了我们未来世界的决定力量。就是因为这些研究，你们人类，作为地球上唯一的智慧生物，打开了自己希望的翅膀。更重要的是，它对人类来说也是很有益的。你可以想象在清晨我们醒来之后，就可以在书桌旁开始上网，如果没有数以万计的计算机先驱的实验的话？与之相似，这也是十分有可能的，那就是我们的子孙将会有机会参加穿越虫洞的旅行，而他会感谢作为祖先的你，因为你为科学研究投了郑重的一票。总而言之，空间项目有很大的潜力，应该放在造福人类的第一优先级作为考虑。
无老师精析： 第一句，优秀范例：The major reason for my propensity for space technology is the potential of scientific research.对比平庸范例The main reason that I support space technology is the potential of science. 本句话，我们平时写支持某个观点，很有可能写的就是类似于平庸范例的The main reason that I support，用动词support来表示支持。但是优秀范例故意用了名词性的my propensity for就显得词汇量非常丰富，而且也使得表达方式很新颖和多样化，其实这可以当做一个小的模板来用，然后再接下来，优秀范例的the potential为后文铺平了道路，也指明了本段的写作方向，这都是极好的加分点！
第二句，优秀范例No matter how the impact it occurred, from the moment of its very advent, scientific resear
第三句，优秀范例It is by these researches that human beings, the only creature with intelligence on the earth, began to beat their wings of aspiration.对比平庸范例Because of these science, humans as the first clever animal, open their hope‘s wing.就会发现平庸范例的as the first clever animal和hope‘s wing真的都只是东施效颦，写的完全词不达意。首先优秀范例用了强调句式It is…that，特别强调researches 的作用，而且这里的these researches还起到与前文呼应的作用，使得本句与前一句所提到scientific research产生关联，说明本句话与前一句话，还是讨论相同的
内容。而且从第一句的，单纯的主谓宾句式，到第二句的No matter位于句首，再到本句话的It is…that的强调句式3句话，每句一个新的表达方式，让考官怎能不加分！然后优秀范例竟然再次祭出同位语！the only creature with intelligence on earth对于前面的human beings进行解释和说明，相当于大魔术之中，也就是3句话3个句型之中，又套了一个小魔术同位语，真是让人击掌叫好！而且在这里，优秀范例的选词也都非常书面化，creature和intelligence都是非常书面化的用语，而且最后又用on earth对其进行限定，漂亮！而且这里的结尾写得非常有诗意！beat their wings of aspiration―张开了希望的翅膀‖，几乎是诗意的文字！考官看到都要醉了！
第四句，优秀范例And more importantly, it had indeed done a great good for the humankind.对比平庸范例The more important thing is that it is very good to humans.优秀范例首先又用and和more与前文进行连接，然后优秀范例的more importantly,看似平淡无奇，但是当我们看到平庸范例的The more important thing看吐了之后，就发现，优秀范例写的真简洁，真好啊！然后优秀范例又用了indeed来进行语气的加强，加分！其后a great good看似平淡无奇，不就是表示―好‖么，有什么了不起的。实际上吧，小伙伴们有没有发现，这里的good，不是形容词，而是名词！是的，这里的good不是形容词，―好‖的意思，而是名词―善良‖的意思！是不是感觉，自己之前都没有这样用过？
第五句，优秀范例Can you imagine getting access to the world wide web at your desk after rising in the morning without the research of millions of computer ancestors?平庸范例You can think when we are awake in the morning, we can go to the internet on our desk, if we do not have so many computer old people?首先，优秀范例的Can you imagine，写的很地道！然后再接下来，不知道小伙伴们有没有疑惑过，―上网‖到底该怎么写？是的，优秀范例，在这里给你做了一个完美的范例getting access to the world wide web，精彩！然后―早晨起来‖到底该怎么写，我们通常都是像平庸范例一样，写个从句when we are awake in the morning，但是实际上，优秀范例，只需要一个简单的介宾短语after rising in the morning，这就够了！为什么要用那么麻烦的从句的形式呢？同理，你们再比较一下优秀范例的without the research of millions of computer ancestors和平庸范例的if we do not have so many computer old people，懂不？
第六句，优秀范例Similarly, it is highly probable that the great-grandchildren of your great-grandchildren would be enjoying a trip across the ―worm hole‖ while giving thanks secretly to his forefather, you, who voted for the expenditure on scientific research.对比平庸范例Similarly, that is possible that our next generations can join the worm hole journey, and they will thank to you as the ancestor who vote for the science.小伙伴们是不是觉得，像平庸范例那样，总是用possible已经感觉到累了，是的，优秀范例告诉你，这种句型下，可以用it is probable that，不仅如此，还可以用一个副词highly来修饰probable，表示很大的可能性。接下来，优秀范例调皮了，竟然写出了the great-grandchildren of your great-grandchildren，无老师只能暗暗地说一声：你狠！然后找个小本，飞快的记下来，原来几代之后子孙，是这么写的。其后，优秀范例的enjoy写的也很地道，在这里用了enjoy，而不是用了take，可以表明，优秀范例的英语，至少已经―小成‖了！然后，优秀范例竟然想到了，―worm hole‖虫洞的例子，只觉得让人脑洞大开，原来还可以这样！
这就完了么？没有！优秀范例接下来又把thank给名词化，并且配上了giving，组成giving thanks，然后再用secretly来就是giving thanks，组成giving thanks secretly to，写得十分精细，而且书面化！不加分都难！而且，作者又精巧的写出his forefather, you，又是用到了同位语，来进行补充说明，而且也将句子的节奏调整的恰到好处，否则，小伙伴们有没有发现，写到这里句子已经很长了，读者马上就要烦躁了，恰好此时，用一个同位语来断句，调整好句子的结构，让读者喘一口气，继续欣赏下去。至于在优秀范例的最后，作者再次用了vote和expenditure，小秀一下自己的词汇量，是的，老娘的英语就是这么凶悍！
最后一句，优秀范例：In a word, the space project enjoys great potential, and should therefore be taken into account in top priority to ensure a better future of mankind.对比平庸范例All in all, space projects have big potentials, they should be put at the first priority to consider.最后一句话，In a word只能算是标准配臵，算不得亮点，接下来的两个亮点，小伙伴们已经遇到过了，就是enjoy和potential，这里，无老师特别强调一下enjoy这个词，很好用的一个词，用的好的话，可以代替take，have等一系列常用的动词，建议小伙伴们多找些例句学习一下。至于优秀范例最后半句话，真的是发力很猛！taken into account in―选择‖、top priority―首选‖以及a better future―光明的未来‖，3个固定搭配，都是耳熟能详，建议小伙伴们都背下来，都是很好用的固定搭配，而且又搭配了一个ensure，虽然很简单，但是我们平时真的用的不多，所以也算加分项！
看得爽吧！快点模仿起来啊！单纯的看懂很容易，但使用好，真的很难！刚把得！