篇一：中考英语作文评分标准
中考英语作文评分标准
篇二：北京2015中考英语作文指导(分8个话题)
话题训练
一、 介绍人（自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化、个人感受等）
单句翻译
1, I am LiMing, a boy of 15, who is tall and wears glass.
2,It?s convenient to take the subway to school.
3, I won?t go to sleep until 10 o?clock.
4, I used to be shy and afraid of speaking in public, but now I am getting used to it. 5, I have been collecting stamps for 3 years.
6, I get up at 6:00 in order that I can spend half an hour reading English every day. 7, I find it interesting to collect stamps.
8, I am not allowed to go out on school nights
9, Not onlydo I finish homework in time but also I help my mom do chores, which makes mom happy.
10, I am so interested in English that I listen to the tapes every day.
11,Listening to music makes me relaxed.
12, Collecting stamps can make me learn a lot about the history.
13,He devoted all his time and energy to teaching, often working late into night preparing for his lessons.（他把所有的时间和精力都投入到了教学中，经常备课到深夜。）
14,He is capable of making his lessons lively and interesting.（他能让他的课生动有趣。）
15,Although he is very strict with us, he shows us great concern.（尽管他对我们非常严厉，但是他也很关心我们。）
16,He helped us not only in class but also after class.（他不但在课上帮助我们，在课I consider him not only as my good teacher but also my close friend.（我不但把他看作我的好老师，而且把他当作我亲密的朋友。）
17,I must work hard so as to live up to his hope.（我一定努力学习不辜负他的期望。） 18,He is such an excellent teacher that I get so much from him, not only the knowledge but also kindness, diligence and appreciation for beauty.(他是一位非常优秀的老师，我从他那里学到的不仅仅是知识还有他的友善，勤奋以及对美的欣赏。)
19,Iam sograteful to my English teacher that I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.(我非常感谢我的英语老师，我祝他身体健康生活快乐。)
20,I made such rapid progress that before long I got high marks and came second in my class.
范文1 A special person in my school life
Sarah is a 15-year-old girl who plays an important role in my school life.
Sarah is the very person who always gives me a hand whenever I need any help. Once, I didn?t do very well in my English test. As a result, I felt disappointed and didn?t know what to do. When Sarah noticed it, she came to my side and helped me find out my weak points and tried her best to help me solve my problems. That day, we didn?t go home until 7:00 pm. Thanks to her help, I?ve made great progress in my English study.
Just as an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” Sarah is a
special person in my school life. Though it?s time to say goodbye to her, I won?t forget her forever. I value the special friendship so much that I strongly believe that our friendship will last till the end of universe.
2, A Helpful Person in My School Life
Mr. Green, my math teacher, he is a helpful person in my school.
One day, the weather was bad, because it rained heavily outside the classroom. It was time to go home but I didn?t have an umbrella. So I couldn?t go home because my clothes were all wet. At the moment, Mr. Green came and said “you can take my umbrella if you don?t have one.” I thanked him and used his umbrella to go home. And I didn?t know he went home without an umbrella until he didn?t came to school and got a fever.He moved me so much that I couldn?t stop my tears falling. I couldn?t believe that he helped me by losing his health. He is not only a teacher, but also like my father now.
What a helpful person in my school life!
2014东城一模:Who is your favorite teacher?
What is he/she like?Why do you love him/her?
3,My favorite teacher
To tell you the truth, it?s difficult toanswer, I love all the teachers in my school. Since you want to know who is my favorite teacher, I will tell you, of course, she is my English teacher ,Ms Wang.
She impresses me as a hardworking,experienced and excellent teacher. She loves English, loves her job, and she is always patient with her students. The reason why I love her is that she encourages me to work hard and to be an honest and responsible person, and her words make me firmly believe that as long as I do my best, I willmake great progress. Besides, no matter what happens, she is always positive and optimistic. She has great influence on me, and I want to be a person like her.
Deep in my heart, she is not only a teacher, but also a close friend.
4, The teacher I Never Forget
1,简要介绍老师的性格,或特长。
2，举一个例子，说明老师是如何在学习或生活上帮助，鼓励你取得进步的。3，感谢老师，祝愿老师。
in class but also after class. About two years ago, Mr. Zhang noticed that I was worried about my poor pronunciation. So he offered me many suggestions to improve it., and he also gave me every chance possible to speak in class. With his help, my pronunciation has greatly improved.
I must say many thanks to Mr. Zhang. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.
优秀范文：
The teacher I never forget is Ms Wang, an English teacher who devoted all
her time and energy to teaching.
When I was in Grade One, I was so poor in English that I almost lost heart and was going to give up. At that time, Ms Wang gave me great courage. She said to me, ? There is nothing difficult in the world if you put your heart into it.? Not only did she try her best to help me with my English, but also she stimulated my great interest in learning English. With her encouragement and help,my English had been greatly improved . I made such rapid progress that before long I got high marks and came first in my class. From then on, I fell in love with English.
What an excellent teacher! I?m grateful to her and wish her a happy life.
5，2011东城一模：
毕业时刻即将到来，你校英文校刊向初三年级学生征文，题为 “My Best Friend”，以此作为对初中生活的纪念。请你写一篇征文，介绍你初中阶段的好友。内容包括他/她的学习情况、性格特点及爱好。（好友的名字用Mary或Jack代替。）
提示词语：hard-working, be good at, friendly, get on well with, dance, draw,
win prizes
范文：My Best Friend
Mary is my best friend. She is hard-working and interested in all the subjects we learn at school. She is really good at Chinese and English. Mary is very friendly. She is always ready to help others.So she gets on well with her classmates and friends. What?s more, she is outgoing. She enjoys taking part in all kinds of school activities. She enjoys dancing, and she also draws well. She often joins in competitions and has won many prizes. I feel proud of her as her best friend.
After this summer vocation, wemay go to different schools for further study, but I?m sure that we?ll be good friends forever.
优秀范文：My Best Friend
Time goes by, I?m leaving for high school. But I?ll never forget Mary, my best friend, who can read my thoughts easily.
She?s expert in study and has set a good example for me. And she?s so friendly that she gets on well with everyone in our class, including the teachers. That?s why the conversations with her always end up with laughter. What?s more, she?s keen on drawing and has won all kinds of prizes so far. We all feel proud of her.
All in all, friendship takes an important role in our life. I?m sure that the friendship between us will be kept in our hearts forever.
6，2015海淀一模
根据中文和英文提示，写一段意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所要完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Emily通过邮件想了解使你发生改变的人。请你谈谈她/他是谁，发生了什么令你改变的事，以及你的感悟。
Who has changed you? Yourparent?
A teacher? A friend or a stranger ...?
? What happened to you?
? What have you learned from the change?
参考例文
Hi! Emily,
I?m glad to hear from you.
I have changed a lot since I became a middle school student. Linda is the person who has changed me.
I did not like running. One day we had a relay race in P.E. class. I hesitated about whether to join in the game or not. Linda came to me and told me not to worry. Then I decided to join them. While running, I could hear my heart beating fast and I could hardly breathe. Just when I wanted to give up, I heard someone cheering on me and found that it was Linda. I regained my strength and kept running to the finishing line. With Linda?s encouragement and trust, I practiced running every day after school from then on. It is she who makes me believe that I have the ability to challenge myself to do something beyond my reach.
Yours,
Li Hua
学生例文
In the depth of my memory, there are lots of people who influenced me a lot and I really appreciate them. However, there is no doubt that my English teacher has changed me a lot.
To begin with, I used to be such a shy girl that I was afraid to speak in public, so when my English teacher asked me to have a speech, I was not sure if I could handle it by myself. She encouraged me to try my best. What?s more, she helped me with my speaking ability, and it improved quickly. At last, I became confident enough to stand on the stage. As everyone clapped for me, I was filled with a strong feeling of satisfaction, I made it!!!
As far as I?m concerned, I learn that nothing is impossible if we put our hearts in it . Moreover, believing in ourselves plays an important role in our daily life, with these, we can not only get stronger but also succeed.
《中考英语满分作文》有关写人的范文有：p74, 75,p90, p136, p139, p149, p208，P224, p309
Beijing, the capital of China, is famous for its long history and splendid culture. 12,For your next vacation, why not consider visiting Beijing?
13,Bird Nest, which was built for the 2008 Olympic games is the largest stadium in
Beijing
14, Beijing, the capital of China, is famous for its long history and splendid culture. 15, Beijing duck (snacks) is one of the most delicious foods, which you should never miss.
16, Beijing is a lovely place where the people are friendly and warm-hearted.
17,Only when you come yourself, can you experience its charm.
（n. 魅力，吸引力）
Beijing is the capital of China. It has a long history. There are many things to see and do here. it has some fantastic sights, the Summer Palace, the Forbidden City, and the Temple of Heaven.
, you can climb the Great Wall to enjoy the natural scenery. you can take photos fly kites in TianAnMen Square. Don?t forget to buy some souvenirs visiting the Bird Nest. , travelling around Beijing by subway is very convenient. , Beijing duck (snacks) is delicious. You should never miss it.
I hope you can have a good trip.
范文:
Beijing is a large city with a long history. There are many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Forbidden City, the Imperial Palace, Tian?anmen Square, the
篇三：2014年北京市中考作文评分标准及优秀范文
北京市中考作文评分标准 ........................... 1
第一档：（15—13分）
完全符合题目要求，表达思想清楚，内容丰富。使用多种语法结构和丰富的词汇，语言通顺，语意连贯，具有逻辑性。允许个别语言错误。
第二档：（12—9分）
符合题目要求，表达思想基本清楚，内容完整。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯。有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
第三档：（8—5分）
部分内容符合题目要求，表达思想不清楚，内容不完整。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，影响整体理解。
第四档：（4—0分）
与题目有关的内容不多，不能表达出自己的思想。只是简单拼凑提示内容，所写内容难以理解。
一 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
英语老师要组织一个经验交流会，他要求每位同学写一篇发言稿。内容包括：谈谈你对英语学习的认识，介绍你是怎样学习英语的，你希望英语老师在课外活动方面开展哪些活动。
提示词语：important, useful, read, listen, speak, English film…
参考范文：
English is used widely in the world. I think it’s important for us to learn it well. English is one of my best subjects. But at the very beginning, I am not good at it. Then I did a lot to improve my English. Firstly, it's very important for me to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that I can go over my lessons later. Secondly, I try to catch every chance to practice listening and speaking, both in and out of class. I’m not afraid of making mistakes. I try to read more in English. I believe that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it.
I am so interested in English that I hope my English teacher will hold an English
party or English corner for us. Then we can listen to beautiful English songs and see interesting English films. I think we can not only improve our listening ability but also have more chances to talk with others in English.
二 假设你叫张明，收到了你的笔友Tom的一封信，请你给他写一封回信。在信中回答他的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。
Dear Li Ming，
I have a problem these days. I don’t think our English teacher likes me. She wasn’t satisfied with me because I got a C in the exam. My classmate Lucy got a C, too. But she praised her. She said Lucy had tried her best and spent most time on English, but I didn’t. It makes me unhappy. I think it’s unfair. Do you have the same problem? What do you think of my English teacher? What should I do?
Yours, Tom
参考范文：
Dear Tom，
I have the same problem as you. I can understand you. But I don’t think your idea is right. She wasn’t satisfied with you because she thought you should work harder. She is strict with you. It’s good for your study. I think you had better spend more time on your study, and try to improve your English. Your teacher will be pleased when you have a great progress. As a student, we should work hard at our lessons and try to unders
Yours，Ling Ming
三 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给的英文提示词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
某英文报纸就“绿色出行”话题开展征文活动，请你投稿。
环境保护，从我做起。目前越来越多的人提倡骑自行车出行。你对此有何认识？你对骑自行车上学有哪些感受？对未来环境你有哪些好的愿望？
提示词语：duty, protect, environment, ride bikes, go out, helpful, air, clean,
do exercise, traffic jam, hope, believe
参考范文：
It’s our duty to protect our environment. More and more people ride bikes when they go out nowadays. It’s helpful to keep the air clean.
I usually ride to school. I only take a bus on a rainy day. On my bicycle I can breathe the fresh air and do some exercise to keep healthy. On the other hand, I can keep away from the traffic jam and make sure I can arrive at school on time. To my joy, I can also do a bit for keep the air clean by riding a bicycle.
I hope everybody will join us and take care of our environment in this way. I believe the air around us will be cleaner with the help of us all.
四 根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60个词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假设你叫张华，美国中学生杰克是你的网友，你们约好今年暑假期间他要来你家生活、学习，你收到了他的电子邮件。请给杰克写一个回复，回答他的问题，并谈谈你自己的美好愿望。
参考范文：
Don’t worry about the food. My parents will prepare each meal for us. If you don’t get used to eating our Chinese food, we can buy some western food in the supermarket near my home.
I also think it’s a good chance for us to learn from each other. In our free time I will take you to visit the Great Wall and other places. During the trips I can practice my spoken English with you. I’m sure you can also make great progress in Chinese.
I hope you will get used to the life here soon. So you can have a good time together with our family. Perhaps next year, I will have a chance to go to the USA and live with you.
Yours,Zhang Hua
五 根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给英文词语供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
某英文报纸就中学生业余生活话题征文，请你投稿。
“中学生业余生活调查”的结果显示: 目前很多中学生喜欢“宅”在家里上网或看电视，而不去参加户外活动。请针对这种情况，谈谈你的看法并给同龄人一些建议。
提示词语： surf on the internet, watch TV , play sports, do outdoor activities…
参考范文：
Nowadays, many middle school students prefer to surf on the internet or watch TV all day in their spare time. But they don’t want to do any outdoor activities.
I don’t think this is good for us to do so. Instead, we should spend our spare time in a better way. First, we’d better do sports regularly. By doing this, we could not only keep healthy but also relax ourselves. It is also a good idea to go out with our friends. Such as watching movies, climbing hills or joining some clubs.
In a word, as middle school students, it is really important to lead a healthy life.
六 学校志愿者协会招募新成员，打算在暑假期间组织志愿者活动。假设你是Li Hua，请你写一篇60词左右的短文给志愿者协会，报名参加此次活动。内容应包括：你自己的简要介绍；你要去哪个地方做志愿者？你能做什么事情？你对志愿者工作有什么感受或体会？请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词：Li Hua，student, Class Four, Grade Three , the Old People’s Home, sing, dance,
参考范文：
In the lake of my memories, there is a photo which always shines like a pearl. It’s a gift from my former teachers and classmates in Shanghai – the best one I’ve ever got.
Before I came to Beijing, they gave me this photo. I was shocked that the photo was taken a year ago during our spring outing. All my teachers and classmates were in the photo. At the back of the picture, there are 48 signatures and best wishes from them. I read them one by one. I didn’t realize that my tears were running down my cheeks until my friends hugged me.
I love this special present so much because it shows me the wonderful time which I spent with my dear classmates and teachers. Besides, it is their wishes that fill my heart with love and warmth all the time. I’ll always treasure it as the most valuable pearl in the world.
七 根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信，信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的回信中。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫张华，是美国中学生琳达的朋友。你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。
Dear Zhang Hua,
Last Saturday, my friends visited me and asked me to go out to play with them.
But my parents didn’t allow me to go out and they even talked to my friends about it for a long time. I felt embarrassed in front of my friends. What’s more, my parents often told me not to play with them because their grades are not good. Do you have the same problem? I need your help.
Yours,
Linda
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear from you.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
参考范文：
Dear Linda,
I’m glad to hear from you.
Yes, I sometimes have the same problem. First of all, I think you should have a talk with your parents. Maybe they will say you don’t understand them. But at least they will know what you are thinking. Then you can invite your teacher to your home to talk with your parents. Maybe this can change your parents’ ideas. Finally, I think you should let them know that your friends are not so bad as they think.
In my opinion, all parents love their children. So try to communicate with them and I’m sure they will understand you.
I hope what I said can help you.
Yours，
Zhang Hua
八 我们的家乡正在发生着日新月异的变化，为配合我区举办的“礼仪门头沟(Charm Mentougou)”活动的开展，请你以“How to behave well ?”为主题，写一篇不少于60词的英语作文参赛。
内容包括：1. 守时，不说脏话；2. 礼貌待人，热心助人；3. 遵守交通规则，不乱扔垃圾；4. ??
注意：1. 文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名；2. 内容可适当扩展。
参考范文：
How to behave well?
As a student in Mentougou, we should behave well. First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need. Then we’d better not talk loudly in public. Don’t throw litter or spit about. And remember to obey traffic rules. Finally, learn to work with others. We need good team work in