篇一：英语微型周记对促进高中学生英语学习的案例研究
英语微型周记对促进高中学生英语学习的案例研究作者：潘璠
来源：《新课程学习·上》2013年第05期
摘 要：针对高中学生写作困境，简要探索如何利用微型周记巩固学生所学知识，提高学生英语学习兴趣和促进师生情感交流，综合提高学生写作技能等。
关键词：高中学生；英语微型周记；实践案例；成果价值
在目前的高中英语教学中，写作是老师与学生都十分头痛的问题。学生面对考试作文短短100多字的要求，常常觉得无从下手。究其原因，是学生英语基础的问题，但更重要的是许多老师放弃在高一、高二年级让学生从事日常的写作训练，而是将学生的写作训练集中到考试前，盲目依赖背诵模版等“速成法”，这种方法虽然有一些成效，但是对今后长期的写作是不利的。
建构主义理论认为，学生应该是知识意义的主动建构者，而非外部刺激的被动接受者；教师应该是学生主动建构知识意义的帮助者而非知识的灌输者。因而，我们在写作教学中应该“以学生为中心”，教师的角色由知识的传授者、灌输者转变成为学生主动建构语言的帮助者和促进者。
笔者认为，练习写作的目的除了巩固所学知识，提高写作能力以外，学生应从中体会到表达的乐趣，使英语学习成为一种创造性的活动。因此，笔者尝试让同学从高一年级便开始写英语周记。这项作业不仅锻炼了学生的写作能力，而且提高了学生英语学习的兴趣。许多学生很喜欢完成这项作业，而且越写越有劲，越写越精彩。此外，教师可以通过周记的批改，了解到学生的动向和脉搏，加强师生间的情感沟通，也不失为是一种意外收获。
一、巧用英语周记，巩固所学知识
在写周记之前，学生对所学知识的巩固主要是依靠死记硬背。这个过程通常是被动的，有的时候仅仅是为了应付考试和老师提出的默写要求。但是，在提出周记写作要求之后，在老师的指导下，学生会在周记中尽量多地使用新学到的单词、词组、句型等。以下这个案例就说明了这一点。
内容：Module 3 Unit 1 The world of our senses
主要词汇：anxious，confuse，frightened，aid等
词组：be anxious about，come to one’s aid， lose one’s way等
篇二：历年各地英语高考作文范文
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：
李明：高个子，戴眼镜
航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11:30
注意：1. 词数100左右
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语和介绍语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
How are you doing?________________________________________
___________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Dear Peter,
How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.
Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。
写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。
注意： 1.短文词数不少于100； 2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
I am an 18-year-old middle school student,
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I’m an 18-year old middle school student. I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help.
Last Sunday, when my parents went out shopping, I suddenly got an idea: why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning? Firstly I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture. After that, I swept and mopped the floors.
At this very moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining. My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes. Tired as I was, I never felt so happy.
3.【2013·辽宁卷】书面表达（满分25分）
—个英文网站面向中学生征稿请你写一篇英语稿件，介绍“中秋节”及这个节日里的主要活动。
1. 写作要点：它是中国的传统节日之一；
2. 家人团聚；
3. 赏月、吃月饼；
4. 还有旅游、访友等其他活动。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。
参考词汇：中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.
4.【2013·福建卷】书面表达(满分25分）
孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。
内容要求：
1.描述漫画内容；
2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题；
3. 提出你的看法。
注意：
1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；
3.词数120左右;
4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇:pave the way
From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.
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One possible version:
From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son , well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating.
It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.
Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful.
5.【2013·安徽卷】书面表达（满分25分）
假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“On the Way to School”为题，写一篇英语短文。 内容主要包括：
1.遵守交通法规；
2.注意举止文明。
注意：1.词数120左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数
One possible version:
These days, breaking traffic rules and littering are not uncommon, causing serious harm to life and the environment. Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone. As for me, it should start on the way to school.
I will keep traffic rules in mind all the way. If I ride a bicycle, I’ll always keep to the right and never cross a road until the traffic light turns green. If I walk, I’ll never forget to use the pedestrian crossing. Meanwhile, I’ll regard it as my duty to help keep our environment clean and healthy. Not only will I keep from littering and spitting anywhere, I will also help clean up the roadside litter whenever possible. I hope my behavior will make a difference.
6.【2013·北京卷】书面表达（共两节，15 分）
第一节 情景作文（20 分）
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺
序，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出 差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。
注意： 1. 周记的开头已经为你写好。
2. 词数不少于 60.
Last Monday,
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Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business
trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done.
I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.
【参考范文】2
Last Monday, my father would be on a business trip for five days. Having gotten my promise of being great at home and taking care of my mother, he rest assured and put his luggage into the trunk of his car. Seeing my father’s driving away, my mother and I waved our hands and said goodbye to him. For a moment, I began to miss my father, wishing that he would be safe and well the next days.
I thought everything would go well, as this was not the first time that my father had been away for several days. Yet, unfortunately, my mother caught a cold the next morning. Looking at her pale face, I experienced high levels of anxiety. However, I told myself that I had to
calm down and look after my mum, as I promised to my dad. The moment I got my mum to sleep, I put cold towel on her forehead, found pills in the medicine box, and made some noodles for her. Luckily, she waked up and felt better, after taking the pills and the noodles. That her fever was gone relieved and satisfied me a lot.
In the next four days, I was taking her body temperature twice a day, ensuring that she was completely well. To our delight, my dad went back home safely and healthily on Saturday. On hearing what I had done to my mum, he, as well as my mum, beamed at me and gave me a big thumb. Hearing their praises and seeing bright smiles on their faces, I really felt overjoyed and thrilled. Conceivably, taking care of my parents was, indeed and definitely, my mission and obligation.
7.【2013·全国大纲卷、新课标II】书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，自制一些中国结（Chinese knot）。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信，请他代卖，要点包括：
1.外观（尺寸、颜色、材料）
2.象征意义
3.价格
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头语已为你写好。
【参考范文】
Dear tom,
How are you? I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me. I made them myself with red silk threads, cloth and other materials. They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond, about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide. In china, these knots stand for friendship, love and good luck. People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses. They are only 12.99 US dollars each. If anyone wants to know more about the knots, let them write to me. Also, do let me know if you need further information. Thank you! Li hua.
8.【2013·湖南卷】
Section C (25 marks)
Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.
请以下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。
match winner loser result
内容：1．自己或他人的一次经历；
2．你的感受。
注意： 1．必须使用所给4个关键词； 2．词数不少于120个；
3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
One possible Version
Last week, a football match was held between we Class One and Class Two.
The players from both sides are all excellent basketball players, so the match went on fiercely at first. At last the result is: the winner is Cass Two, and we were the loser.
We didn’t win the match, but we didn’t lose heart. One the one hand, we think that friendship comes first, and match comes second. On the other hand, since we all tried our best, we had no regret. In our life we may meet many failures, as long as we try our best, there’s no need feeling regret for these failures. What’ more， we should analyze the reasons of failure to get success for the next time.
In a word, success is important, so is failure, because it’s the mother of success.
9.【2013·江西卷】
书面表达（满分25分）
星光中学（Xingguang High School）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：
1. 时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（Daqing Mountain）；
2. 活动的过程；
3. 你对于这次活动的评论。
注意： 1. 词数120左右。
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise, our school organized a mountain-climbing on April 10. Hundreds of us took part in it.
It was a nice day. At 8:00 am, we gathered at the foot of Daqing Moutain and set out for the top in high spirits. All the way we were chatting, singing and laughing, enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery. When some fell behind, others would come and offer help. About 2 hours later, we all reached the top. Bathed in sunshine, we jumped and cheered with joy.
The activity benefited us a lot. Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work, it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time!
10.【2013·山东卷】
写作（满分30分）
假如你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据双下要点给他回封邮件：
1. 未及时回信的原因；
2. 你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）
注意：1. 词数：120-150；
2 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
How are you doing? You asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation. I am sorry that I didn’t reply without delay. How I wish I would read and reply your email as soon as I received it. However, I was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. As a result, I had no choice but to completely focus on my study, for which I am very sorry. I hope you can understand me.
During the holiday, I am going to do a part-time job. On the one hand, I can earn some money to reduce the burden of my family. On the other hand, I accumulate the social experience, which does good to my future life. At the same time, I will not forget to go over my lesson. I will spend a instructive holiday. How will you spend your holiday? I hope you have a good time.
These are my plan for the summer vacation. What’s yours? I am looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Lin Hua
篇三：2007年至2015年北京高考英语作文
lass="txt">假设你是李华，要给英国笔友Harry写封信，介绍你班两位同学竞选班长的过程。请按下图顺序描述。提示词：竞选班长monitor election 注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。2.词数不少于60。【参考范文】
Dear Harry,
How are things going?
Last Monday our class held a monitor election. This was our first election, so everyone was excited.
Two of my classmates took part in the race: Liu Dong and Wang Hong. They each gave a speech telling us what they would do when they were elected.
Then we voted for the monitor. The result was 28 to 15
in Wang Hong’s favor. Wang Hong became our new monitor.
The whole class cheered for her, and she promised to do the best she could for us all.
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2008年第一节 情景作文 （20分）
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为校刊英语园地写一篇题为“Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件。 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。注意： 词数不少于60.
提示词： 游乐园amusement park 垃圾箱bin
【参考范文】
Last Thursday, we to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We such as going boating,
The next day, we the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However,
bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we
put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin We were tired but happy.
2009年第一节 情景作文 （20分）
假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“Green Action in Our Class”为题的英文稿件。
注意：词数不少于60 提示词：郊区
suburbs
【参考范文】
Green Action in Our Class
In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering them. up a board reminding
protect and beautify our environment.
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2010年第一节情景作文(20分)
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。
注意：1．周记的开头已为你写好。 2．词数不少于60。
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.
【参考范文】
clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map.
2011年第一节 情景作文 （20分）
假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图表述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，词数不少于60。
2012年第一节 情景作文（20分）
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日
活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来，向校报
【参考范文】
Last Monday, we our Chinese teacher suddenly slipped and fell.
soon.
This Thursday, she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons .We and proud of having
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投稿。
Saturday, June 2 Fine
【参考范文】
Saturday, June 2 Fine
This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the
2013年
第一节 情景作文 （20分）
假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出 差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。 注意： 1. 周记的开头已经为你写好。
【参考范文】1
a business trip. He would be away for three days.
Just the next morning I found my mother wasn’t feeling well. She had a cold. I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.
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【参考范文】2
Last Monday, my father would my promise of being great at home and taking care of my mother, he rest assured and put his luggage into the trunk of his car. Seeing my father’s driving away, my mother and I waved our hands and said goodbye to him. For a moment, I began to miss my father, wishing that he would be safe and well the next days.
anxiety. However, I told myself that I had to calm down and look after my mum, as I promised to my dad. The moment I got my mum to sleep, I put cold towel on her forehead, found pills in the medicine box, and made some noodles for she woke up and felt better, after taking the pills and the noodles. That her fever was gone relieved and satisfied me a lot.
I was taking her body temperature twice a day, ensuring that she was completely well. dad went back home safely and healthily on Saturday. what I had done to my mum, he, as well as my mum, beamed at me and really felt overjoyed and thrilled. Conceivably, taking care of my parents was, indeed and definitely, my mission and obligation.
2014年第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35
分）
你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往;
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。注意：
1.词数不少于50.
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris,
_____________________________________________________________________________ Yours,
Joe考点：考察提纲类作文写作指导：
本文属于应用文中的书信，要求写信给英国朋友Chris说明取消计划的原因并建议推测旅行至8月份。以第一人称为主。要点：
1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游;
2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往;
3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。
这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要
赋予变化。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How is everything going?
I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now because my left I’wish you could understand.
Yours, Joe
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假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊"英语园地"写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。
注意：1. 词数不少于 60.2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. 【参考范文】
There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school.
I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I and wrote a report. Then we went to meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.