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| 四级写作经典范文及点评汇:找寻宝藏 | |||||
每个人的潜力就像是等待挖掘的宝藏，而 你 才能找到宝藏的位置。潜力的发掘，在于打破自身局限性而 无限的 。相信，冲破局限，找到属于你的宝藏吧！ Search Your Own Treasure Look up to the heavens and imagine the stars and planets are sparkling jewels dancing across the night sky. Your potential is like those jewels with a dazzling array of facets. Put another way, your human potential is virtually unlimited.① Problems arise from a perspective that “potential is a taboo or code word for failure.” It is for fear of failure that we are sometimes afraid to try new things. Realizing that we will not become an instant expert, we sometimes choose to cop out and not even make an attempt to be or try something new.② Perhaps worse yet, sometimes perfunctory efforts are made, unsatisfactory results are obtained, and an “I knew I couldn’t do it and I know I can’t do it” attitude is reinforced and seemingly justified. Refresh yourself from the perspective that so-called “mistakes” do not constitute failure; they are only new lessons to be learned. Failure is really giving up and quitting, as juxtaposed to persevering and persisting. There is universal law that states, “Practice precedes excellence.” Myth and history are filled with stories of individuals who had struggled against all odds and obstacles and just kept after what they truly wanted until they reached their goals successfully. Naturally, we all have our limitations, and prudence dictates that we respect them. However, wisdom encourages us to stretch beyond and transcend our limitations. Keep going on，your treasure is waiting for you. ［236 words］ 行文点评 本文
好文妙译 找寻宝藏 抬首仰望天空，想象一下，日月星辰仿佛是夜空中闪烁跳跃的宝石。而你的潜能就像那些各个钻面上闪烁着眩目光彩的宝石
振作起来，那些所谓的“错误”并
词汇斟酌 sparkle v. 发光，闪烁 dazzling a. 令人眼花缭乱的，耀眼的 facet n. 面，刻面，平面 taboo n. 禁忌 perfunctory a. 马马虎虎的，敷衍 juxtapose vt. 并排，并置 persevering a. 坚韧的，不屈不挠的 odds n. 不平等，差异， prudence n. 审慎 佳句临摹 ①【注释】put another way换句话说 【临摹】He soon found what he did had already been done by others，put another way, he was wasting his time. 他很快 ②【注释】cop out 是 【临摹】Don’t try to cop out of it by telling me you’re too busy!别告诉我你太忙来推脱责任。 思如泉涌 Once we stop growing, our end is near.一旦 Wonders are many, and nothing is more wonderful than man.天下奇迹无数，却无一比人更奇妙。 --下载<<四级写作经典范文及点评汇:找寻宝藏>>Word文档 ,本文由东星资源网收集，版权归原作者所有 |
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总分总的顺序
。开篇引出主题，
段和
段分别从正反两
论述，思维的局限性对人们发掘潜能，走向
所带来的不同
。最后一段
句话以退为进，先承认人的局限性。然后呼吁人们
局限，发掘潜能。
是最后一句的点睛之笔，呼应首段，点明主题。
很平和的心态来品读文章，随后
比喻将潜能的无限性，也
文章的主题引入。让人不觉突兀，而且兴趣有加。
。换句话说，你的潜力
上是无穷无尽的。
“潜力是
问题。而正
害怕失败，使得
有时不敢去尝试新生事物。
意识到
马上
行家里手，有时
，就会
并使
失败；它们只不过是你需要吸取的新的教训罢了。真正的失败是“放弃”或“舍弃”，这和“坚忍不拔”或“
不懈”正好相反——“
在历史当中，到处可见
追求
目的，决不罢休。
局限性。
智慧却鼓励
前进吧，你的宝藏在等待着你。
他所做的事情是别人
做过的。换句话说，他在浪费
。
含有贬义的俚语，意思是逃避、推诿、临阵退缩。