●写作任务● 根据以下图画及文字提示，请用英语简要叙述“程门立雪”的故事，并谈谈你的看法。 词数：70词左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：thick 厚的
respect尊敬
Long, long ago in China there was a young man called Yang Shi. One day ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
●写作导航●
第一步：“三”个确定
1. 确定体裁：这是一篇叙述故事的看图作文，属记叙文。看图作文的关键在于认真分析图画内容及内在联系，要从有限的画面空间扩大视野，根据图中所表达的中心内容，展开联想，拓展成文。
2. 确定时态：讲述的是过去的事情，可用一般过去时或过去进行时。
3. 确定人称：本文是讲述杨时尊敬老师的故事，应用第三人称。
第二步：理清思路
本文我们需要重点叙述事件的发生、发展和结果。
事件的发生：杨时去拜见老师程颐。我们可写这样一句话与给出的开头衔接：he had some problems and he decided to ask his teacher, Cheng Yi.
事件的发展：天在下雪，老师在睡觉，杨时就在雪地里等。这时要注意使用过去进行时。
事件的结果：老师醒来，地上的雪已经很厚了。该句可用多种句式来表达。如：When the teacher woke up, the snow on the ground was very thick.
另外，不要忘了发表一下自己的看法。看法可以是向杨时学习，也可号召同学们尊重老师等。
第三步：拟定提纲
第四步：连句成文
Long, long ago in China there was a young man called Yang Shi. One day he had some problems, and he decided to ask his teacher, Cheng Yi. It was snowing heavily at that time. However, when he got to his teacher’s home, Cheng Yi was sleeping then. Yang Shi had to wait in the snow outside. He kept waiting in the snow until his teacher woke up. When his teacher found him standing in snow, the ground was already covered with thick snow!
We should learn from Yang Shi and respect our teachers.
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