篇一：2015年高考英语全国卷1短文改错说题稿(上传版)
lass="txt">一、选题说明1.出处：说题的对象是2015年高考英语全国卷I短文改错。这篇短文改错需要重点关注的内容是I think I would, in countryside, clean or, on the development, have been shown, a very seriously problem, The air we breathe in, much rare animals, we must found, protect your
environment。
2.背景：环保是长期以来社会各方面关注的问题，这点也从国家政策层面可以得到证明，比如2015年1月1日起正式实施的，号称“史上最严”的新修订《环境保护法》。同时，重金属造成的土壤污染、鞍山环境污染等事件在2015年上半年引发了关注。应该说，2015年全国卷I的短文改错应时而动，体现了高考命题的时代性和时事性。
二、命题立意
1.考查目标
动词的用法，题目中有三处，暨think,been及find；
形容词和副词的用法，题目中有两处，暨seriously及Much；
名词的用法，题目中有一处，暨airs；
介词的用法，题目中有一处，暨on；
连词的用法，题目中有一处，暨or；
代词的用法，题目中有一处，暨your；
冠词的用法，题目中有一处，暨in countryside。
2.命题手法
此篇短文改错旨在考查考生发现、判断、纠正语篇错误的能力，强调考生要有语篇意识，充分检测考生对语篇的观察能力，评价能力及应用能力。错误的设置是针对考生平时书面表达常见错误设计，因此短文改错的难度符合考生水平。
3.教学导向
引导学生关注实事；
根据考查的目标可得出，作为高三英语教师在教学中要注重动词、形容词等相关知识点的讲解。
4.解题思路
三个步骤：通读全文，把握大意；细读全文，仔细斟酌；再读全文，复核审查。
三、答题分析
1.答案推理
第2句根据I would be 中would，结合时态，把think改为thought；
第3句根据“我想念的是乡村的老家”这个特指，在countryside前加the；
第4句根据前后意思，特别是逻辑关系，把or改为and；
第5句根据“随着....的发展”这一固定的表达，on the development中的on改为with； 第6句根据名词短语“lots of studies”与动词shown的关系，把been删除；
第6句根据problem的名词词性，结合原则上形容词修饰名词，把seriously改为serious； 第7句根据airs意思为气氛，而air表空气，结合语意，把airs改为air；
第8句根据animals为可数名词，结合many修饰可数名词的复数，把much改为many； 第9句根据情态动词+动词原形整个作为谓语，把found改为find；
第9句根据语意，尤其主语是we的提示，把your改为our。
2.预测学生解答
对于基础好的学生，应该是第6处改动，也就是airs改为air，容易出错；
对于基础中等的学生，应该是第2处改动，也就是countryside前加the，第5处改动，也就是把been删掉，第10处改动，也就是your改为our容易出错；
对于基础相当有限的学生，第1处改动，也就是think改为thought，第3处改动即or改为and，第9处改动，也就是found改为find容易出错。
3.答案对教学启示
除了第2处改动，暨countryside前加the，第7处改动，暨airs改为air知识点比较容易被忽视，其余都不偏，也不难，说明在高三备考复习中要注重讲解双基。
四、讲评设计
1.讲评教学策略
教授学生5个答题原则：
以改变实词形式为原则；以单词形式变化最小为原则；以添加或删除虚词为原则；以多“改正”少“添删”为原则；以保持愿意不变为原则。
2.讲评学习指导
引导学生：
重视掌握基本词汇和语法，规范使用常用词汇；
广泛阅读，增加语感，提高语言知识运用的准确性；
做题时以句子为单位，从语篇角度根据内容，查找行文逻辑错误；
因为短文改错一般是对学生写作常见错误进行设置，引导学生把短文改错和书面表达结合起来。
3.讲评变式拓展
动词的设置，3处：
把第5句后半部分的the environment has been polluted中been去掉；
把第6句中global warming has already become中的has改为had；
把第7句中we breathe中的breathe改为breath，暨把第2个e删除。
名词的设置，2处：
把第6句a very serious problem中的problem改为question；
把第9句中we must found ways中的ways改为way。
形容词、副词的设置，2处：
第5句中Unfortunately改为Unfortunate；
第8句中Many rare animals中的rare改为rarely。
介词的设置，1处：
第8句dying out中的out改为from。
连词的设置，1处：
第10句If we fail中把If改为So。
冠词的设置：
第1句I was a child中把a删除。
五、教学反思
做好短文改错，词汇是基础的基础。对于词汇的复习，本人方法上缺乏新意，多使用听写、完成句子、翻译等方式，导致学生出现厌学情绪，造成短文改错答题不理想，本人应该多反思，并尝试接下来在增强词汇造句的情境，尤其是幽默下下功夫。
附：2015年全卷卷I高考短文改错
题目：
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green.
Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .
答案:
1.think –thought2.countryside前加the 3. or—and
4.on—with5.been去掉 6.seriously—serious
7.airs—air 8. much—many9.found—find
10.your—our
篇二：2009-2014高考英语全国卷分类汇编之改错题
标1卷Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!
cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these (have) been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they . As ∧(a) result, the plants are growing that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing tomatoes at on cost!
2014新课标2卷
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 (There) are three lessons in the ’t)
g∧(to) music.
2014大纲卷
All of us need friendship. The understanding 76.______________
between two friends mean both of them have similar77.______________
ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is78.______________
impossible for him to help each other and to make 79.______________
their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80.______________
“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship81.______________
should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is82.______________
wise to have as many good friends that we can. 83.______________
The more friends we have, the more we can learn for84.______________
one another, but the more pleasure we can share together.85.______________
1.[2013新课标1
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
town, (?
2.[2013新课标2卷]
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain（瓷器）industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
The book I’’o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of (?（瓷器）1.【2012全国新课标】
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I
was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began
to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.
1.【答案】little---less
【解析】根据文意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑衅性。此处less修饰形容词。
2.【答案】toy—toys
【解析】根据each of 可知，应该是我的玩具中的每一个，故用复数形式toys。
3.【答案】did—went或者did 后加go
【解析】考查短语go wrong意为：出错。
4.【答案】it—them
【解析】此处前文指toys，所以后用them。
5.【答案】在parents前加my parents bought me new toys.此处my和me对应。
【解析】英语中需前后一致，my
6.【答案】which---what
【解析】此处what作宾语从句的主语，句意：看所发生是一切。
7.【答案】tear---tore
【解析】通过观察整个文章的时态以及my fifth bi
8.【答案】to---for
【解析】此处意为：不再给你买玩具了。Toys for sb意为：给某人的玩具。
9.【答案】must—could/might
【解析】根据文意：拥有更多的耐心，我就能使玩具使用的更久。
10. 【答案】去掉last前的to
【解析】解题关键：make sb/sth do，此处make作“使”解，其后接不带to的不定式作宾补。
2.【2012全国I】
Every one of us can make a great efforts to
cut off the use of energy in our country. To begin with, all
of us can start reducing to the use of oil by driving only
when we have a real need. That won't be easy, I know，
but we have to start anywhere. What's more, we can go to
work by bike once and twice a week, and we can also buy
smaller cars that burn less oil. Other way is to watch our
everyday use of water and electric at home. For example,
how many times have you walked out of a room and leave the
lights or television when no one else was there?
76.【答案与解析】efforts—effort 考查名词的单复数。解题关键：掌握短语make a great effort to do sth意为：尽力做某事；
77.【答案与解析】off---down考查动词短语的含义。此处语意表达有误，cut off意为：切断，杜绝；cut down意为：减少。根据文意应是减少。
3.【2012全国II】
Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you opinion about water saving.
Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live
without water and neither agriculture or industry can go without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less. Many countries in the world find we don’t have enough water. To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all
out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water. Sincerely,
Li Hua
76.【答案】opinion前加my 77.【答案】animal---animals
篇三：2016全国卷高考英语word文档短文改错
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