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篇一:雅思大作文方法,新东方老师整理推荐(全)

="txt">考察频率最高专题:

? 1. 教育:儿童,中学,大学教育体制和方法

? 2. 科技发展对生活的影响

? 3.文化的组成因素和保护

? 4.生活方式的转变和社会观念

? 5. 全球化及其影响

? 6. 环境问题和环境保护

? 7. 政府投资

考察次重点专题:

? 1. 艺术的价值

? 2.媒体的作用

? 3.广告的影响

? 4.动物的保护和动物实验

? 5.城乡差距和城市化

? 6.犯罪

? 7.弱势群体:妇女的权利,妇女参军

? 8.体育

雅思写作错误检查表(10条)

1. 使用了正确的语法结构:时态语态,主谓一致,从句,用词准确(名词,动词,形容

词的形式),介词,冠词

2. 句式有变化

3. 使用了一定量的词汇

4. 拼写没有错误

5. 观点明确,语意精准不模糊

6. 每段主题句都表明了该段中心思想,所有拓展句支持句都紧扣主题

7. 大量的过渡性词语(逻辑连接词),使句子间和段落间都具有逻辑性和条理性

8. 提供了足够的细节,例子或论据

9. 每一段话都得到充分展开

10. 每一段话都紧扣文章主题

如何应用:

a. 1347当做检查项目,其他当做考前提醒

b. 时间紧,就改第一段和每段的前两句话

三.大作文首段基本写作策略---三步走

1. 转述背景,扩展题目(setting/ background information ):把题目所提供的背景再用自

己的话拓展转述同义替换一下

题目:It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to be a good sports person or musician.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

考官写的开头段:

The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sports, art or music.

2. 说明意图(statement of purposes):

写作意图=你的立场或者观点,争取用一句话说明你的观点,位置可以是在首段的最后一句

3. 提及下文,分支观点的罗列和总结(summary of main points):

对主要观点用短语或者短句形式进行总结概括

注意:一般情况下包括前两步就可以了,第三步视情况而定.句子个数不是绝对的 开头段写作套路赏析

It is inevitable that as technology develops, so traditional culture must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible, you cannot have both together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

开头段1:

It is a fact of life that the advance of science and technology has been accompanied by a decline in traditional culture. (背景转述) In my opinion, this is not necessarily a bad thing, because some aspects of traditional culture hamper progress and should be abandoned. Moreover, it is natural that people should want to find new ways of doing things .(写作意图) It is a fact of life that…

这是现实中的事实….

It is natural that…

很自然….

It is quite common these days that…

目前很普遍的是….

开头段2:

It is an undeniable fact that scientific and technological developments have brought considerable benefits to every walk of life. Especially since the Industrial Revolution took place, our lives have been made much more convenient by inventions such as trains, airplanes and computers. (背景转述) But I think that the loss of our traditional culture is too high a price to pay for it. (写作意图)

1. It is an undeniable fact that…

不可否认的是…

2. A is too high a price to pay for B

A对于B来说是一个巨大的代价

The environmental deterioration and destruction are too high a price for our economic growth.

四.议论文五大题型分类和写作套路

(一)讨论型 discuss

题目表述:

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

讨论正反两方面观点并给出你的观点

例如:题目1

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

题目2:

Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

讨论型 discuss写作套路

套路1.两方平衡式---两个观点公平讨论

开头段:不表达个人观点立场

主体段1:反方观点(你不倾向的观点)--2点理由

主体段2:正方观点(你相对倾向的观点)-- 2点理由

结尾段:方法1---你同意其中一个观点

方法2---都同意

套路2. 一方倾向式---两个观点不公平讨论

开头段:表达个人观点或立场

主体段1:详谈正方观点(你相对倾向的观点) ----2-3点理由

主体段2:简谈反方观点(你不倾向的观点) ----1-2点理由

结尾段:重申你的观点或立场

文章布局及思路练习题目1---犯罪类

Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

正方观点—惩罚固定

1. Fixed punishment will have a deterring effect on society.(对…有威慑作用) , accomplish

the purpose of deterrence

2. Guarantee / ensure social stability and security to a large extent

3. A sign of the triumph of good over evil

4. fixed punishment to each type of crime could raise individuals’ awareness of obeying the

law.

反方观点—惩罚不固定

1.Taking the circumstances and motivation of a crime into account is a prerequisite for establishing and ensuring justice and equity.

绿色部分:同类信息大量携带(并列)

前提,先决条件:precondition, premise, prerequisite

在….的前提下: under the premise precondition / prerequisite of

2.Some kinds of crimes should be taken differently, such as self-defense and manslaughter.自我防卫和过失杀人

3. Criminal laws have to provide minimum and maximum penalties惩罚 for the punishment and the law also have to foresee certain cases of exemptions. 免除,豁免 文章布局及思路练习题目2---旅游类

Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

正方观点---旅游业有益于文化保护

1.Intergrating tourism and cultural heritage could provide economic incentives for protecting culture.

economic incentives = financial support

2. Museums, historical sites and ruins enable the visitors to get a deep insight into local customs and practices, experience local traditions , art and heritages, respect the host community and its environment , promote the dialogue over natural and cultural resources between different countries.

反方观点---旅游业有害于文化保护

1. Tourism creates pollution and waste. The rubbish discarded by travelers would have a negative impact on / do harm to / do great damage to the tourist spots and local cultural ruins.

2. Excessive building (roads, hotels etc.) destroys natural habitats and spoils the landscape.

3.Local traditions may be lost due to the exotic cultural conflicts.

4.Traditional jobs and skills die out (e.g. farming, fishing).

5. Local people are forced to work in the tourist industry, which would take their attention and vigor away from the cultural conservation.

(二).同意与否型 agree or disagree

题目表述:

Do you agree or disagree…?

To what extent do you agree or disagree?

考试重点

例如:题目1

It is often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and that it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management, work and interpersonal skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目2:

Some people think that stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the road. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

同意与否型agree or disagree写作套路

开头段:明确表达个人观点立场

辩护段:用2-3个理由(分支论点)为自己立场辩护, 每个分支论点后紧跟2-3句支持句 让步段:承认对方观点有好处(1句)并解释(1-2句),然后指出其缺陷并进一步修正它或提出改进建议(1-2句)

结尾段:重申立场并引申展望

文章布局及思路练习题目1---教育类

Education used to be a short period of training, but today, people treat it like a lifelong practice. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

接受终生教育的理由

1.In order to survive in the fierce competition out of society, people need to receive reeducation to improve qualification and obtain specialized expertise or all-round ability.

2. People’s education concept is in transition, students are not confined to a certain age group and everyone could choose the way of study suitable to himself .

3. Value of life, self-value, self-worth,自我价值 ambition, quest for knowledge求知欲 and spiritual needs motivate / urge / stimulate / spur 促使people to pursue lifelong education. 让步:教育可以是短期的

1. Some kinds of schooling could be accomplished in a relatively short period, such as

language training, or computer skills training.

2. For some relatively impoverished / poverty-stricken families, a short-term education is

much more affordable and accessible.

文章布局及思路练习题目2---政府职能类

There is now an increasingly tolerant attitude towards homosexuality in society, especially in the west. Some governments should change the law to allow homosexual marriages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

同意特殊癖好者结婚

1. Effectively slow down the birth rate and population growth.

2. Is good for eliminating discrimination against homosexuals in general.

3. Ensure the justice and equity of society and civic rights.

4. Lighten the spiritual burden and kill the loneliness of the homosexuals

不同意特殊癖好者结婚

1. As gay or lesbian couples are unlikely to have children, there is no real necessity for the

right to marry ---marriage is the grave of love.

2. Most of the major religions in the world, such as Christianity, Islam and Judaism frown

upon homosexuality.

frown upon:不赞同,不批准

(三).比较优缺点型advantages and disadvantages

题目表述:

Advantages and disadvantages

Benefits and dangers

Strengths and weakness

Merits and drawbacks

Positive and negative

例如:题目1

In order to improve the quality of education, students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Do you think the advantages of this practice outweigh its disadvantages?

题目2:

Nowadays, more and more students choose to pursue their advanced study in foreign countries. Discuss the merits and drawbacks of studying abroad.

比较优缺点型写作套路

开头段:先不用表达个人立场

主体段1:论述advantages

主体段2:论述disadvantages

结尾段:表达个人立场

文章布局及思路练习题目1—教育类

In order to improve the quality of education, students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Do you think the advantages of this practice outweigh its disadvantages?

学生参与评估老师的好处

1.Contribute to the improvement of teaching methods, change the traditional learning by rote死记硬背 or spoon-feed schooling.填鸭式学习,boost students-centered / students-oriented education, and eventually realize the improvement of instruction.

篇二:新东方雅思写作常用句型

="txt">2. Perhaps the hottest topic in the area of communication is the widespread use of the Internet.

3.英语作为全球语言的发展是20世纪末和21世纪初最为瞩目的现象之一。

The development of English as a global language is one of the most remarkable

phenomena of the late 20th and early 21st centuries.

4.文化和旅游业之间的关系已经在世界范围内引起了广泛关注。

The relationship between culture and tourism has received a great amount of attention throughout the world.

5.最近几年,关于国家之间贸易活动的争论已经被明显快速扩展的进口激化了。

In recent years , the debate about trade activities between countries has been fueled/ intensified by overtly rapid expansion of importing.

6.教育已经成为一个重要产业,它对社会的重要性无可比拟。

Education has become an important industry , an industry that is second to none in terms of importance to our society.

7.由于健康和生活条件的改善,人类寿命快速延长,这是二十一世纪所有发达国家的一个特征。

The rapid extension of the lifespan , resulting from improved health and living conditions, is a feature of all developed countries in the 21st century.

8.媒体自由是否应该被限制是一个被激烈争论的话题。支持者和反对者之间的争论一直没有平息。 It is a bitterly contested/highly contentious/highly debatable issue whether freedom of press should be restricted . A row between supporters and opponents remains unsolved.

9.最近几年,人们已经对不加控制的汽车尾气排放的严重影响表示了关注。

People have , in recent years , shown concern on the dire consequences of increased car emission.

10.就市民个人是否应该获得他们正在享受的医疗保健和教育服务而言,存在很大的争议。

There is a big controversy surrounding/over individual citizens’ entitlement to the health care and education service they are enjoying.

11.最近人们认为,城市扩张对健康有负面影响。

Urban sprawl has recently been thought to have negative effects on people’s well-being.

12.先天和后天的争论是心理学领域最经久不衰的话题之一。

The nature vs nurture debate is one of the most enduring topics in the field of psychology.

13.在最近几十年里,社会上暴力的不断增加已经引起了公众的关注。

It has raised public concern over the past decades that the violence in the society is on the rise.

14.在过去的二十年里,环境保护已经上升成为最热门的话题之一。

Over the past twenty years , environmental protection has arisen as one of the hottest topics.

15.随着世纪不断推移,女性权益和女性在当今社会的角色已经得到更大的重视。

As the century continues/progresses , a greater emphasis has been placed on women’s right and their role in today’s society.

16.研究人员赞同一个观点——基因影响人的性格特点。

Researchers agree on the point that genes influence personality traits.

17.对于很多教育者而言,如何将聪明学生的才华开发到极限是一个有趣的问题。

For many educators , it is an interesting issue how to explore intelligent students’ talents to the utmost.

18.随着因特网的使用变得普遍,它的优缺点已经成为争论的话题。

With the utilisation of the Internet becoming ever-present , its pros and cons has become a subject of discussion/a matter for debate.

19.在这几年里,没什么话题可以像围绕保护动物的争论那样吸引如此之多的注意。

No issue in recent years has drawn as much attention as the debate surrounding animal protection.

20.在过去大约二十年的时间里,贫富之间的差距这一话题受到无休止的争论。

For the last twenty years or so , the issue of the divide between the rich and the poor has been subject to ( nothing but ) endless dispute.

21.最近几年,人类社会的生活标准似乎已经有了本质提高。

In recent years , it has appeared as if / it seems that the living standard of human society has been substantially improved.

22.电视暴力是否导致现实生活中的暴力行为这一问题是许多研究的主题。

The question of whether or not violence on television leads to violent behavior in real life has been the topic of numerous studies.

23.在一个文明社会里,或许没有什么比接受教育更为重要的了。

There is probably no issue more important to a civil society than the access to education.

24.在最近几年里,体育运动员和艺人高收入的持续曝光已经引起社会上对这些名人价值的新的讨论。 In recent years , the ongoing disclosure of the high income of sportsmen and

entertainers has ignited a new row on the value of those famous figures.

25.与此相反的意见是动物保护是耗费时间和徒劳无益的。

The counter-argument/the contrary argument/the objection is that animal protection is time-consuming and uewarding.

26.关于城市扩张和其影响一直很受关注。

Concerns over urban sprawl and its consequences are not new.

There is an ongoing concern over/about urban sprawl and its consequences.

27.人们对于媒体暴力和社会暴力之间的因果关系持质疑态度。

There are serious doubts about the causal link between media violence and social violence.

28.在我看来,对动物保护的反对意见是基于不正确的事实和偏见的。

It seems to me that the objection against animal protection is based on incorrect facts and stereotypes.

29.我强烈反对减少学校中的音乐和体育课程。

I profoundly/strongly disagree with curtailing music and sports at school.

30.妇女有资格从事所有行业,同时也应该被给予这样的权利,对此我表示赞同。

I subscribe to the notion that females qualify for every walk of life and they should be granted such rights.

31.就我所知,参与全球贸易的好处是很多的。

As far as I know /As far as I am concerned , the advantages of participating in global trading are many.

32.对于电脑给小孩学业带来的益处,我持很高的评价/对些评价甚低。

I have a good/low opinion of the contribution of the computer to children’s schooling.

33.我认为艺术的角色是不可或缺的,虽然它对社会的影响并不总是显而易见的。

It is my considered opinion that the role of art is indispensable , although its impact on our society is not always manifest.

34.我认为当我们评估国际旅游业的益处时,需要考虑很多因素。

It is my view that many factors should be taken into consideration when we evaluate the

benefits of the international tourism industry.

35.从海外进口蔬菜和水果的好处和坏处将在下面进行讨论。

The pros and cons of importing fruits and vegetables from overseas will be discussed below.

36.在理解这个观点上,有两点很关键。

Two points are critical in understanding this argument.

37.两个观点都是部分正确。

Both sides/arguments are partly right.

38.要明白为什么有如此矛盾的观点,我们需要先看看支持每个观点的事实。

To understand why there are such conflicting opinions , we must first look at the facts in favour of each argument.

39.我同意他们的建议——住房问题只能由政府来解决。

I agree with their recommendation that housing problems can only be addressed by government.

40.我对这个事情有两方面的看法。

I am of mixed opinions about/on this.

41.有关电脑的使用对小孩学习上的有利影响,我持支持态度。

I have positive attitudes toward the beneficial effect of using computers on children’s learning.

42.我认为,环境保护是我们保持经济持续发展所做努力的主要部分。

As I see it/From my point of view , environmental protection is a central part of our effort to keep the economic development sustainable.

43.我认为在那些最需要解决的问题上需要花更多的人力、物力,这是很明显的。

In my opinion , it is clear/true/obvious/certain that more manpower and material should be spent on the problems to which the masses most need solutions.

44.我认为政府比公司更有可能减少或者避免一些在科学研究中不道德的行为。

I am of the opinion that /I take the view that the government is more likely than companies to reduce of avoid immoral/unethical practices in scientific research..

45.我认为种族、性别、年龄和残疾歧视都应该被禁止。

I am sure/certain/convinced that discrimination on the grounds of race , gender and disability should be banned.

46.就个人来说,我觉得关于工业化是好是坏、是福是祸的争论是不会有结果的。

Personally , I think that disputes about whether industrialisation is good or bad/a boon or a bane/a blessing or a curse are fruitless.

47.以下是在家工作优缺点的概括性论述。

Following is an outline of advantages and disadvantages to working at home.

48.城市扩展的正面和负面影响将在下面进行概括。

Both positive and negative effects of urban sprawl will be outlined below.

49.我觉得私人企业和政府之间的合作关系可以产生理想的效果。

I think/believe/suppose that a partnership between private enterprise and the

government can create a desired result.

50.我相信我们可以很有把握的说:人的特点是由环境而不是由遗传决定的。

I believe we can safely say that one’s characteristics are determined by environment butnot by heredity.

51.我支持培养孩子的独立意识是老师和父母的基本任务之一这个观点。

I subscribe to /support/am in favor of an opinion that cultivating children’s sense of independence is one of the basic tasks of parents and teachers.

52.这篇文章会具体说明国际合作在环境保护上的优势。

This essay will elaborate on the strengths of international cooperation in environmental protection.

53.这篇短文的目的是描述一些导致女性在高等教育中比例过低的因素。

The purpose of this mini essay is to describe some factors accounting for females’ underrepresentation in tertiary education.

54.虽然技术发展会产生很多问题,但是它整体的影响是正面的。

Although technological advances would create a number of problems , their overall effectmay be positive.

55.在全球范围内,全球化给每上行业既带来了机会又造成了问题。

Globalisation poses both opportunities and problems for every industry on a global / international / worldwide scale.

56.这篇文章将分析基因和环境在个人犯罪行为中的不同作用。

This essay will analyse the different functions that genetics and the environment play inthe criminal behavior of individuals.

57.没有足够的证据证明基因在一个人的成长或行为上占据最重要地位。

There cannot be enough evidence to conclude the point that genetics play the most important role in the outcome or behaviour of an individual.

58.一个人的犯罪行为有可能是他们的基因背景和成长环境的共同结果,这样的结论是很明显的。

It seems obvious to reach the conclusion that an individual’s criminal behaviour can be the result of both their genetic background and the environment in which they were raised.

59.根据给出的理由,我深信严厉的刑狱对于那些潜在的罪犯是有效的震慑工具。

I am convinced , for the reasons I have given that tougher prison sentences may act/ serve as a deterrent to other would-be offenders.

60.当今的就业环境更加以技术和经验为基础。

Today’s employment environment has become increasingly skill-and experience-based.

61.飞机是最快的交通工具,然后是火车和汽车。

Air is the fastest mode of transportation , followed by rail and automobiles.

62.家庭暴力在世界上很多地方是一个大问题。

Domestic violence is a huge problem in much of the world.

63.工业空气污染,尤其是那些发展中国家的工业空气污染,不仅对周围的环境非常有害,而且对本国的居住者也有害。

Industrial air pollution , especially that of the developing nations , is extremely harmfulnot only to the surrounding environment , but also to the inhabitants of that country as well.

64.媒体既是信息的来源也是娱乐的来源。

Media is both a source of information and a source of entertainment.

65.估计或是衡量媒体在当今社会的重要性是很困难的。

It is difficult to estimate or measure the importance of media in today’s society.

66.现代广告业是都市工业文明的核心部分,反映了当代生活最好和最坏的方面。

Modern advertising is an integral segment of urban industrial civilization , mirroring contemporary life in its best and worst aspects.

67.在建筑外观上,设计师很容易与建筑的业主以及未来租户想法不一致。

The architect of an apartment building can easily be at cross-purposes with the owners of the building and with the future tenants regarding the look of a building.

68.人口的老龄化和出生率的降低给国内就业市场带来了严重的问题。

An ageing population and a declining birth rate constitute a serious problem for the domestic employment market.

69.高等教育如今是终身教育的核心部分和知识社会的基础。

Tertiary education is a central part of lifelong learning nowadays and a cornerstone of today’s knowledge society.

70.大部分的医药发展,包括移植技术、癌症治疗、对心脏病的了解和控制,或多或少都基于动物实验。

Most of medical progresses , including improved organ transplant techniques , cancer therapy , better understanding and control of heart diseases , are , in some measures , due toanimal experiments.

71.高等教育在政府预算上的比重是非常大的。

The financial weight of tertiary education on a government’s budget is often heavy.

72.作为房屋短缺的一个直接后果,过度拥挤已经成为最严重的社会问题之一。

Overcrowding has become one of the most serious social problems as a direct result of housing shortages.

73.老师的使命之一是帮助学生开拓新的视角并为实现社会和学术目标而努力。

One mission of teachers is to help students t develop new perspectives and to strive forachievable social and academic goals.

74.政府对艺术、娱乐、新闻或者信息内容上的控制与言论自由的原则在根本上是冲突的。

Government’s control over the content of are , entertainment , news , or information is fundamentally at odds with the principles of freedom of speech.

75.城市的基础设施建设是不可能赶得上城市人口增长步伐的。

Urban infrastructure development is unlikely to keep pace with urban population growth.

76.水对于长期经济发展、人的健康和环境维持是至关重要的。

Water is critical for long-term economic development , human health and environmental sustainability.

77.找到解决环境问题的方法是科学家现在所面对的最大挑战之一。

Finding a solution to environmental problems is one of the greatest challenges that face the scientists today.

78.垃圾会给人类和其他动物带来健康威胁,并导致疾病的蔓延。

Landfills can pose health risks to humans and other animals , resulting in the spread of disease.

79.农场主可以考虑用害虫的天敌代替致命的化学品来对付农作物害虫。

To deal with crop pests , farmers can consider replacing deadly chemicals with natural enemies.

80.没有政府的投资,医院为了生存不得不追求利润。

Without the government spending , hospitals have to chase profit to survive.

81.改进健康保健系统的措施包括在城市建立低成本的医院以及为整个人口提供健康保险。

Measures to improve the health care system include building low-cost hospitals in cities and providing healthcare insurance to the whole population.

82.一个国家的健康医疗系统不完善反映这个国家的一些大问题——贫富之间、城乡之间的差距不断加大,政府部门的透明度和效率不高。

A country’s dysfunctional healthcare system reflects its biggest problems—the

ever-increasing divide between the rich and the poor , the city and the countryside , the low transparency and inefficiency of government departments.

83.除了功能上的特点,设计师还考虑视觉上的吸引力,努力增加工业产品的可销售性。

Beyond providing functional characteristics , designer consider visual appeals , in an effort to improve the marketability of manufactured products.

84.单亲家庭不能够保证一个小孩的正常成长。

Sing-parent families cannot guarantee a normal development of a child.

85.人类的长寿有助于人类社会的进步。

Human longevity will contribute to the forward progression of mankind.

86.人口的快速增长会在世界范围内给经济施加压力。

Rapid population growth will put a strain on economies around the world.

篇三:新东方雅思VIP语法教研组-张頔-浅谈如何让雅思写作更出彩之定语从句

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定语从句是语法内容中的一大核心部分,也是雅思写作中必不可少的一个知识点。 它能比较显著地彰显出写作者的实力,一个恰到好处的定语从句,能体现出写作者对整体句子较为精确的掌控能力,并且增强句子的紧凑感。当今,很多同学对其用法模糊,只能凭借着多年的语感去编写。为了确保写作中使用的定语从句准确合理,学生应该对此从句有个系统的学习。

1. 定语从句的概念以及结构

在复合句中修饰名词或者代词的从句叫做定语从句。被定语从句修饰的名词称为先行词;起到承上启下作用的词为引导词(关系词)

先行词 引导词(功能:替代先行词)

2.

a. 那些花费很多时间打游戏的人不愿意参加社会活动,也不愿意与人交往。 Those spend plenty of time watching TV will refuse to participate in social activities and interact with other.

b. 每个人都夸奖的那个女孩来自中国。

The girl

c. 手机是一种可以使人们互相沟通的工具。

The mobile phone is kind of tool enables people to communicate with each other.

d. 人们往往会和性格,爱好与自己相近的人交朋友。

People tend to make friends with those ones character and hobby are

similar to their own.

e. 我将永远不

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忘记我第一次见你的那一天。

I will never forget the day

f. 最激动人心的一次旅行经历是在巴厘岛,在那里我有生以来第一次体验了潜水。

The most exciting travelling experience for me is the one in Bali I experienced diving for the first time in my life.

g. 手提电脑如今很普及的一个重要原因就是它的使用方便。

A major reason

3. 非限定性定语从句

特点:主句与从句之间用“,”隔开;不能用that引导;从句修饰整个主句

? which引导的非限制性定语从句

e.g. 很多车沿着街道停,这是交通堵塞的直接原因。

Plenty of cars are parked along the streetis the direct cause of traffic congestion.

? as引导的非限制性定语从句--- 加分句式:一般放句首

As is well-known,

As is expected/ supposed/ suggested,

As has been said/ mentioned/ pointed out before,

As will be shown in the next paragraph,

e.g. 正如上文所述,中国政府越来越关注整个社会的可持续发展。 has been mentioned, Chinese government is increasingly concerning the sustainable development of the whole society.

4. 考官如何在雅思写作中使用定语从句

However, the parents who do not allow their children sufficient free time for leisure activities outside school hours are misguided.

If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance, then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.

There are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.

They are generally more confident and independent than children who stay at home with their parents and who are not used to strangers or new situations.

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