篇一：2010-2015年新课标1高考英语作文范文汇总赏析
which is close to your university.
②I’m writing to invite you to be a
It will start at 2:00 pm and last for about three hours. ④Ten We hope you will 1
2011 年高考英语全国卷 I & 新课标卷
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：
1.本人简介；2.求助内容； 3.约定时间；
4.你的联系方式（Email:lihua@126.com;Phone:12345678）
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to
English. ③My puzzle is that I don’t know whether this course mainly teaches English or teaches in English. I am available at 8 am on Wednesday. ⑦Would that be OK?
⑧Please do feel free to contact me by e-mail or telephone at any time. ⑨My email address is lihua@1236.com and my phone number is 12345678.
Look forward to your reply!
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假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡((Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括:
I.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准. Dear Sir or Madam, ①I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. ②I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. ③I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. ④I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. ⑤What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well.⑥I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
2012 年高考英语全国卷 I3
2013 年全国大纲卷、新课标 I
假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30Dear Peter,
How are you doing? ①I am writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I have asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before. ②Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. ③Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? ④Thank you in advance!
⑤ His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6th. ⑥My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. ⑦And he will be in a blue jacket.
Looking forward to your reply.
2014 高考英语作文全国卷 I
假定你是李华，计划暑假间去英
国学习
英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情
况（箭头所指内容）
注意：1．词数100左右；参考词汇：
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Dear Sir/Madam,
①I am a student in China
I’ve seen your ad, and I’d like to know something more about your six -week English course.③ First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? ④Besides, I wish there would not to be too many students in a class. ⑤I’d also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. ⑥Will there be a host family or a university dormitory?
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
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篇二：2010年高考湖南卷作文题解析及佳作点评
2010年高考湖南卷作文题解析及佳作点评
【题目】
请以“早”为题,写一篇不少于800字的议论文或记叙文。
【考题解读】
此题平实却出人意料,立意空间较广,容易入题,但拓展方面需见功夫。从答题效果来看,本题平均得分41.76分。佳作比去年多,偏题作文比前几年明显减少;记叙文或叙事散文明显增加,偏于议论的写作现象得以缓解。与现实的关联度有所增加, “平实地向现实延伸”是一个很好的、值得关注的导向。
什么是“早”,“早”的内涵是什么?考生很容易想到“早”的第一个含义是“太阳出来的时候”,稍难想到的是“时间靠前,在一个时间之前”。这个题目属 “单词型”题目,含义丰富、外延广,要想选择恰当的切入点,需采用短语法和造句法把题目的外延缩小。如:短语类型,“早晨”“早上的阳光”“早晚的事”“早间新闻”“趁早”“早安”“赶早”等等;句子类型,“出名要趁早”“早起的鸟儿有虫吃”“早上做什么晚上做什么”“做任何事情都要早一点”“早一点是一种生活态度”“早一点做好准备”“道一声:早”“早一点长大”等等,这样不管是记叙文还是议论文,中心思想就能够在最短的时间内,根据自身掌握的素材和自己最想说的话确定下来。
【标杆作文一】(一类文上)
内容25 表达25
发展10 总分60
早
湖南一考生
谁不期待喷薄欲出的朝阳?
谁不渴盼“草色遥看近却无”的春?
谁不想消除“草色烟光残照里”的哀怨?
这一切,都源自对早的向往。有了早,就能欣赏到“鸡声茅店月,人迹板桥霜”的孤寂美;有了早,就能领略到“岭上晴云披絮帽,树头初日挂铜钲”的奇异;有了早,就能抒发“长风破浪会有时,直挂云帆济沧海”的宏愿。于是懂得,早是人生不可缺少的一抹亮丽色彩,是实现人生精彩的动力。用早鼓舞自己,不会有“少壮不努力,老大徒伤悲”的悔恨,不会有“黑发不知勤学早,白首方悔读书迟”的无奈。有了早的激励,才有了比尔·盖茨微软帝国的不朽传奇;有了早的激励,才有了张瑞敏“全球唱响海尔”的凯歌;有了早的激励,才有了俞敏洪新东方英语学校的繁花似锦。而失去了早出发、早行动、早成功,很多人只能搭乘人生的末班车,只能任灰暗成为生命的主色调,不能书写人生的华章。毕竟,“笑看庭前花开花落, 漫观天边云卷云舒”只是一种超然,辉煌是人生最壮美的云霞,何不用“早” 来激励自我,磨砺一方月明云开的壮阔苍?
此亦似人,此亦如国。早是一个国家兴旺发达的条件,是一个社会繁荣昌盛的保证。有了早的激励,才有了荷兰“海上马车夫”的美誉;有了早的激励,才有了大不列颠“日不落帝国”的胜景。试想,若没有当年邓小平的高瞻远瞩,做出改革开放的英明决策,只怕中国只能在“文革”的阴影下踟蹰不前,哪里会有当前的恢宏气势?
同样,一个国家没有早的眼光,只能落后于世界潮流。失去了早,就如同明清时期中华文明无奈的式微;失去了早,就如同戈尔巴乔夫领导下的苏联的土崩瓦解。
早是心中不落的太阳,早是心中不倒的信仰。有了早的激励,又何必再发“塞上长城空自许,
镜中衰鬓已先斑”的悲音?有了早的激励,又何必再唱“流水落花春去也,天上人间”的哀曲?用早激励自我,用早装点梦想,终会迎来春暖花开的灿烂,终会领略江河源头的胜景奇观。
【点评】
本文在内容上由人生说到国家,紧扣“要有早的意识、要早行动”的观点,运用多种论证方法(举例、引用、正反等)加以申说,文气贯通。“气盛则言之短长与声之高下皆宜”,语言尽管略显花哨,但整体而言与内容的表达相谐,瑕不掩瑜。
【标杆作文二】(一类文中)
内容23 表达23
发展10 总分56
早
湖南一考生
微风拂过,带来一阵清香,朋友,如果时间还早,我愿意用小瓶把那丝清香收集起来给你留作纪念,可惜,我们已面对分别;小鸟在枝头叽叽叫着,伙伴,如果岁月还早,我愿意与你和着那清脆声音,可惜,我们已长大;安静的考场,空白的试卷已被我填满奋斗,老师,如果毕业还早,我愿再仔细聆听您的每一句教诲,可惜,明日我将踏进另一片天空下。
“时间还早呢!”这样的语言我已无力再说起,从踏入高中起,这句话便成了我的口头禅。开始闷热的五月丝毫给不了我压迫感,每天依旧快乐地倒数着日子,直至那一天。“某某是我的好朋友,整个高中形影不离,她好像已成了我的空气,不能失去。”“我不读了,你知道的,成绩不好,去读技校好了,家里决定的。”这个消息如同玩具松了发条一般在我脑中转不过来。“不来上课了。”你接着说,脸上写满了释然。拥抱了一下,你就走了。我知道,其实你不舍。可是,朋友,现在我才明白,时间已不早,我们已面对离别。如果可以,我不愿后知后觉。
岁月已不早,爬树或在小溪中打水仗的岁月已流失。亲爱的伙伴们, 你们在哪里,是否在那棵茂密的梧桐树下聆听那时的欢声笑语,是否在澄清的小溪边寻找那些小小的脚印,是否在开满花朵的山坡上细闻残留的芬芳?那日遇到你,我已认不出,你叫出了我的名字,尴尬布满了你我的脸,却又一起大笑。恍然明白,岁月已不早,你我已长大。
亲爱的老师,直到几天前,我才明白,毕业已在眼前,如果毕业还早,我愿再仔细聆听您的每字每句,我愿再次送上几束鲜花表达对您的敬意,我愿再认真写您布置的作业。可惜,时间已不早,我只能这样诉说着对您的谢意。
窗外的青松随风摇曳,像是在诵读一首关于时间的诗;花香还在飘散,像是在轻唱一曲关于离别的歌,亲爱的老师、朋友,时间已不早,我己准备翱翔自由的蓝天。
【点评】
文章在“早”这一特定情境下,抒发对时光流逝、岁月蹉跎、时不我待的感叹,切合题意,中心突出。主体部分详写三个场景,首尾呼应,结构意识强,突出了中心,情感浓郁,感染力强。但有些表达不是很清晰。
【标杆作文三】(一类文下)
内容20 表达23
发展10 总分53
早
湖南一考生
古往今来,无论是古代圣贤还是现代教育家都推崇“早”。“早”似乎笃定是一个褒义词。《劝学》与三字经都劝诫我们早上学;三味书屋的书桌上刻的“早”字也在警醒着学生们早早到校。老师们对到校早的学生赞扬有加。但“早”真有那么好吗?我看未必。
“让孩子赢在起跑线上”是近年来十分流行的一句话。很多家长开始对孩子进行早期教育,所以,一些牙都没长齐的小孩子叽里呱啦说出一大堆外语的现象也越来越平常了。
但是,一些专家经过科学论证对此热潮做出回应:“让孩子赢在起跑线上”的教育方法并不科学。儿童的大脑发育尚不完全,让他们接受超越年龄的教育是不符合规律的,这种不遵循客观规律的做法必定引发许多问题,孩子以后可能会早衰。并且,这种“做什么事都要比别人高一等”的思想不利于儿童的心理健康与身心发展。
退一步说,这种“赢在起跑线上”的孩子即便有很多,但“输”的孩子占大多数。我国经济尚处于中低水平,想必很多家长承担不起这种“赢”的教育负担。
三国时,战乱频繁,战争中战略战术尤为重要。“先发制人”“先入为主”等理念都被融入了战争中。但在尔虞我诈的情势下, 似乎“后发制人”略高一筹。诸葛亮就很擅长这样的计谋,什么“空城计”“草船借箭”等一系列他自编自导自演的好戏一一上演,将敌军玩弄于股掌之间。诸葛亮本人也不青睐“早”,拿着扇子淡定地摇着,“风雨不动安如山”最能体现其状态。想当初刘备三顾茅庐,费了九牛二虎之力才将他请出山,想想也是在他的预料中吧。
早,有时也反映了一个人心浮气躁的状态,“口无遮拦”是出口太早。做事情要像打拳击一样,不能直着向前冲,有时收拳是为了更好的出击。欲扬先抑能达到更好的表达效果,“枪打出头鸟”也警示我们早未必好。所以,早未必是万能的褒义词。
【点评】
作者从“早教”的角度立论,提出“早未必好”的观点,切合题意。但文章并未始终紧扣中心论点,第四段开始有些游离,中心还算突出。全文符合文体要求,结构完整,语言流畅。观点有启发性,很有个性。
篇三：2010-2015全国高考英语作文题目汇总
2015年新课标全国I卷高考英语作文范文：
假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿。一、要点如下：1、栏目介绍；2、稿件内容 3、稿件长度：约400字4、交稿日期：6月28日前
对于书信作文强调两点，简单&通用。需要注意书信作文三段论，把中间段的要点部分用出彩的过渡词做链接，就能写出漂亮的文章。二、写作提纲
根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：
第一段：问候+写信背景（我校办杂志）+写信目的（套用十大书信之“求助信“写法）第二段：主题句+拓展句1（介绍外国生活）+拓展句2（介绍外国节日）+拓展句3（不少于400字）+拓展句4（6.28前交）第三段：我希望（你能帮助我）。我相信（大家会喜欢你的文章）。感谢你（读我的信）。请回信！
三、名师范文 Dear Peter,
How are you doing? （问候）Recently, our school newspaper will started a column about western life and culture in order to cultivate our interests, broaden our horizons and eich our afterschool life.（写信背景+白银裤衩+八大万能利） As a result, I am writing to ask you to write an article on it. （写信目的）
Here are some details about it. （经典主题句）To begin with, you may talk about your life in your middle school, so that we Chinese students can know more about you. （简单句+白银裤衩）Besides, you can introduce a western festival, such as the Christmas Day, the New Year or the Thanksgiving Day, which must be not only meaningful but also interesting. （简单句+平行并列结构+白银裤衩+八大万能利）What’s more, your article should be at least 400 words.（简单句，不用升级，以便“长短结合”） Finally, I hope you would be so kind as to send it to be before June 28th, so that it can be published in time. （求助信套话+白银裤衩）
Hopefully, you could do me the favor.（六大结尾句之
一） I have the confidence that everyone will like your article. （六大结尾句之二）Thanks for reading my letter in such a hot summer.（书信必备结尾句） I’m looking forward to your reply and your article.（书信必备结尾句）Best wishes, Yours,LiHua
2015年新课标全国Ⅱ卷高考英语作文范文
书面表达(满分25分)
假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人们过重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括： 1.出发及返回时间;
2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。 注意：
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.结语已为你写好。
【老师范文】 Dear Lucy,
How are you doing? I am LiHua, a 17-year-old teenager currently studying in your school. Recently, our class plan to visit the nursing home this Sunday in order to help the old there and eich our afterschool life. As the vice monitor, I would like to invite you to come with us.
Here are some details about this activity. To begin with, we will leave the school by bus at 8:00 AM and return at 5:00 PM. Besides, there will be a lot of activities such as making Chinese dumplin
gs and giving performances, which will be not only meaningful but also interesting.
Hopefully, you would like the plan and join us. I have the confidence that we will have a great time there. Thanks for reading my letter. I am looking forward to your reply and your decision. Best wishes,
Yours, LiHua 2014年全国卷高考英语作文题目：
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”、请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文. 1、 家庭 2、 工作 3、 业余生活
注意：1、次数100左右; 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你写好 I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues; I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regula
exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful. 2013年全国卷高考英语作文题目：关于送中国画的书信
假定你是李华，请你给笔友peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同事询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明：
李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985
到达：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, How are you doing?
I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before.Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is the first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!
His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am. August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in blue jacket.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,Li Hua
2012年高考英语作文真题：全国卷1
假定你是李华，从互联网（（the Internet）上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore） 举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。
内容主要包括：
1.自我介绍（包括英语能力）;
2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家）; 3.希望获准。 注意: 1.数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I knowthat you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'lI be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.
Looking forward to your reply!
Regards, Li Hua
2012年高考英语作文真题：全国卷2
假设你是李华。你班同学决定为小名举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：
1、时间：周五晚8点至9点 2、地点：学生俱乐部
3、内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 4、要求：备小礼物 注意：
1、词数100左右，开头语已为你写好； 2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。 One possible version Hi Susan,
We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday. We'd like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please keep quiet about it. We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And it's going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, we'll light the candles and sing "Happy Birthday" togather for him. Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games. It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party, too.
Yours, Li Hua
2011年高考英语作文真题：全国卷
假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1．本人简介；2．求助内容：3．约定时间；
4．你的联系方式(Email：lihua@1236．com；Phone：12345678)。
注意：
1．词数100左右：
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3．结束语已为你写好。 Dear Sir/Madam,My full name is Li Hua, a student of summer courses here.
I am writing this letter to report some of the problems and puzzles I encountered when learning the course of Business English. My puzzle is that I don’t know whether this course mainly teaches English or teaches in English. In other words, how could I balance between business knowledge and English itself?
I hope you could give me some directions so that I can work it out without too much difficulty. I am available at 8 am on Wednesday. Would that be OK? Please do feel free to contact me by e-mail or telephone at any time.
My email address is lihua@1236.com My phone number is 12345678. Look forward to your reply!
Yours, Lihua 2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(全国卷) 假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见．请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括： 1．说明你是该报的忠实读者
2．赞赏该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻 2)介绍名人成功故事 3．提出建议： 刊登指导英语学习的文章 注意：
1．词数100左右，开头语己为你写好； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Editor-in-chief,
Congratulations on the 5'h anniversary of Global Mirror!
I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very muck mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn
all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular. Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
2010年高考英语作文真题：全国卷I
假设你是育才中学学生会主席，你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,想要邀请附近某大学外籍教授Smith女士来做评委，参考以下通知，给她写一封信：主题《人与自然》。时间：6月15号下午2点至五点。地点：501教室。参赛选手：10名学生。联系人李华电话：44876655。欢迎大家光临。 Dear Ms. Smith: I’m Li Hua, president of the student Union of Yu Cai Middle School. It’s greathonor for me to invite you to be a judge in the following English speech contest.
With its theme “Man and Nature”, the contest will last for three hours on june 15.Besides, the ten participants will get together and compete with each other in Room 501. I do hope you can join us and give us some instructions. Please call me at 44876655 if it is convenient for you. We are all looking forward to your reply.With best wishes.
Yours,
Lihua
2010年高考英语作文真题：全国卷II
假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter 曾表示希望来中国教书，你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1、教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等。 2、授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础） 3、工作量：-----每周12学时，任选三门课
-----担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor） 注意：
1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、开头语已经为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。 Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some course to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and American Today, and teach of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students' English club our school's English newspaper.
Please tell me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I'd be more than happy to help.
Best, Li Hua.