篇一：江苏高考英语作文评分标准
高考作文评分标准
各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档 (很好)：(21—25分)
1．完全完成了试题规定的任务。2．覆盖所有内容要点。3．应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4．语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。5．有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6．完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档 (好)：(16—20分)
1．完全完成了试题规定的任务。2．虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。3．应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4．语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。5．应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6．达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档 (适当)：(11—15分)
1．基本完成了试题规定的任务。2．虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。3．应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。4．有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。5．应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。6．整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档 (较差)：(6—10分)
1．未恰当完成试题规定的任务。2．漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。3．语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4．有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。5．较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。6．信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档 (差)：(1—5分)
1．未完成试题规定的任务。2．明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。3．语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。4．较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。5．缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6．信息未能传达给读者。
不得分：(0分)
未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
书面表达：
1．本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言 (内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性) 初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。(如果没有使用较复杂的句子结构，评分时将分数降低1个档次)。
3．词数少于130或多于170的，从总分中减去2分。
4．如漏掉1个主要内容要点，将分数降低1个档次。如：“1) 两幅照片反映的内容；
2) 学习和生活中存在的心理问题；3) 解决这些心理问题的办法”均分别视为主要内容要点。
5．语言形式错误分为大错和小错。大错包括“时态、语态、主谓一致”等，小错包括“单词拼写错误、小品词用法错误”等。
如出现1个大错，从总分中减去1分。如出现1个小错，从总分中减去半分。
6．如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低1个档次。
7．如层次不清楚，写作没分段，从总分中减去2分。
篇二：2010-2013年江苏高考英语作文
2010 第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）
81.假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用
注意：
1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。
3.文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my
Thank you for listening.
第五部分
8l. Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my
experience of learning English with you.I'm interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future.Naturally lt’s very important for me to learn English well .As everybody knows
vocabular is an important part of language, just like bricksin a building .I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible . After class．I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio .Besides ,I've learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now．I'd like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school.Firstly ,we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned ln order to have a better grasp of it.Secondly．I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them. Finally，1 suggest we have
more Endish activities，such as English contests and festivals.
Thank you for listening.(150words)
2011 第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）
81.下面这幅照片展现了女儿为回家妈妈拿包的情景。请根据你对这幅照
片的理解用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容：
1. 描述照片内容，如情景、人物、动作，等等；2.结合自身实际，谈谈
你的感想；3.举例说明你能为家长减负做些什么。
注意：
1. 可参照图中文字及下面文章开头所给提示，作必要的发挥想象。 ．．．．．．．．
2. 词数150左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
The burden of students has been a hot topic for years,but the load of parents has received little attention,especially from their own children.
2012 第五部分: 书面表达(满分25 分)
81. 生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请 你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,向学校英文报“Happy Teens冶专栏投稿。
注意: 1. 对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。
2. 词数150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life.
第五部分(满分25 分)
81.
Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.
To be honest, it was Su爷s fault but Li was also to blame—they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.
To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and
stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others’place.
Don’t be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely.
2013 第五部分: 书面表达(满分25 分)
81. 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以 “Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题，用英语写一篇作文。
参考词汇：
banner (横幅)
stump (树桩)
你的作文应包括以下内容：
1. 简要描述两幅图的内容；
2. 概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；
3. 举例说明两幅图对你的启示。
注意：
1. 可参照图片适当发挥；
2. 作文词数 150 左右；
3. 作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Actions Speak Louder than Words
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 81.
Actions Speak Louder than Words
People celebrate Earth Day differently. In Picture 1, a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps, but in vain, while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees.
The message conveyed here is clear: “ Actions speak louder than words.冶 Our earth is suffering severe damage. Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter. Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees, to better the environment.
Actions are important in other fields, too. Instead of shouting empty slogans, it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules, stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams. Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.
篇三：江苏高考英语作文经典模版范文
高考英语作文模版
名人名言
To choose time is to save time .( Francis Bacon , British philosopher )
合理安排时间就是节约时间 。( 英国哲学家 培根. F.)
★★★对比观点题型
（1） 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。
1． 有一些人认为。。。
2． 另一些人认为。。。
3． 我的看法。。。
The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三).
While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .
（2） 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点
Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带来的好处).
In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由之二)．
Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)．
★★★阐述主题题型
要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述．
１． 阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义．
２． 分析并举例使其更充实．
The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it.
First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)．
In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it.
★★★解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
１． 问题现状
In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ----------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
★★★说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预测）
１．说明事物现状
２． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）
３．你对现状（或前景）的看法
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ----------------(Ａ的优点之一). Besides -------------------（Ａ的优点之二）.
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(Ａ的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,------------------(Ａ的第二个缺点)．
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法)．(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way,
---------------(对前景的预测)．)
★★★议论文的框架
(1) 不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ）
There is a widespread concern over the issue 作文题目. But it is well known that the opinion concerning People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some peoplehold the idea that_ 观点二_____. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二__. Therefore, there is no doubt
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view Itis not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
（2）利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both
positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. An(原文来自：wWW.DxF5.com 东 星资源网:年江苏高考英语作文)d secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题____ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the
disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
Currently, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)__作文题目_______ .It is really an importantconcern to every one of us. As a result, we must spare no efforts to take some measures to solve this problem.As we know that there are many steps which can be taken to undo this problem. First of all, __途径一____. In addition, another way contributing to success of the solving problem is ___途径二_____.
Above all, to solve the problem of ___作文题目______, we should find a number of various ways. But as far as I am concerned, I would prefer to solve the problem in this way, that is to say, ____方法_____.
It is well know to us that the proverb: " ___谚语 has a profound significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means ____谚语的含义____. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically )
A case in point is ___例子一______. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the proverb ____谚语_____.
With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: ____谚语_____. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and job..
★★★图表作文的框架
as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题____ has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the otherhand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______.Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.